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Deep Poetry, Ponder Over Life

Updated on August 18, 2017
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I'm BEEyond excited to BEE writing poetry as my mind is always BUZZING with thoughts about poems(see WHAT I DID there).k, sorry ill stop.bye


They betrayed me and let me down,

Broke me to pieces and threw me to the ground,

Yet I flew with my red cape to help them from above,

Only to realize I lived a lie and abhorrence was disguised as love,

I forgave them and kindness prevailed,

I supported them and their ambitions availed,

but when I fell , I felt numb pain echo through,

As I realized they never cared like I do,

But time has let go of the past,

So don't let cruel reminiscences last,

The time has come to wake up from this vicious lie,

Let them go for they are not worth your cry,

They give you their advice and then you take it,

They say they care about you but they fake it,

They say they love you but you may never know,

Their despise is disguised by their love show,

They give you compliments and make you smile,

They say 'my love for you proceeded miles',

But how could you know who were the liars,

the heart-breakers, the ones who ignite fires,

The ones who made you shed blood instead of tears,

The ones who said they'd be there but were never volunteers,

They stayed to use you by their menacing theft,

They said they'd guide you but they immediately left,

They never loved you and they never will,

They only stayed until their wants were nil.

The time has come to wake up from this vicious lie,

Let them go for they are not worth your cry.

This next poem is very dear to me as it speaks to many people on a personal level and spreads a substantial message to the public about suicide and much more. It carries some sentimental stories and serious issues that deserve to be spoken about.

Hold your breath

It feels like nothing for the first second

It then lasts longer from what I reckoned

I swing restlessly searching for my dear life

But it finds me before I do and stabs me with a knife

I hold my breath for longer and wait a bit more

And I quickly realize this is the way if life was a bore

My heart beats faster and my body pleads for air

But I shut my mouth forcefully because this world is not fair

My face turns blue and my throat feels dry

Maybe that’s why tears feel better when we cry

Those tears can soak your emptiness and keep you filled

But we were taught water evaporates so im no more thrilled

Reality slaps me in the face and my brain begs more

Should I surrender and open to life the door

Or should I send myself peacefully off shore

"WHAT are you doing" speaks a voice in my head

"life is a blessing" like the wise man once said

See, how can a breath control your core existence

And take you closer or farther from death's distance

Are we the wrong doers and the unfortunate ones

Or are we not doing things right and using our breath as self-harming guns

I set myself free and charge like a bird

And inhale like a drowning man saved and assured.

My life is precious and so is yours

So keep your head up and look for the right cures


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