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Poem - The Corset

Updated on April 28, 2012

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I read this fantastic Hub called Sexy-Womens-Corsets by Djtphn1 and the words of this poem occurred to me.. thanks very much Djtphn....

It is always difficult to know when to finish a poem.... this one was no different.. except i have a few more lines if anyone would like to hear them ?

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the corset felt alive

on impulse I petted it, its owner purred

i looked at all the silk rope

and the knots and thought...

this could be tedious

unless it has buttons at the front

I turned her over eagerly

only to be disappointed

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      des donnelly 9 years ago from NYC....

      Hi Moonmaiden ... thankyou, great comparison I always have to resort to the breadknife to get cd cases open... the little silver tab is micro size and comes away on its own... who designs this packaging for customer experience...

      Drax

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      Fayme Zelena Harper 9 years ago from Lucerne Valley, CA

      I enjoy your wit. Now if only I could finish my corset. A corset is like those plastic wrappers on new CD cases. You are so excited to enjoy the contents if you could just get the thing unwrapped.

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      des donnelly 9 years ago from NYC....

      Emmabalmer thank you very much for the praise....

      don't tell me you have buttons on yours Emma... *laughs*

      ..Drax..

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      des donnelly 9 years ago from NYC....

      vreccc thanks for the comment, paradox is probably something that should be available in tablet form... ..Drax..

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      emmabalmer 9 years ago

      Great poem! I love wearing the old-school boned Victorian corsets. Expensive, but well worth the sexy figure. I've taught my husband well in the ways of traditional corset removal :)

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      vreccc 9 years ago from Concord, NH

      I kind of like how it ends. It lets the reader fill in the 'disappointment' with their own life experience of bedroom follies :)

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      des donnelly 9 years ago from NYC....

      ang3lz thanks very much, it is often difficult to find that special place to write but thanks for the encouragement, it is appreciated ..Drax..

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      Iðunn 9 years ago

      d, *blush* ah you and your wordz.  you almost sound irish. ;)

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      ang3lz 9 years ago

      Gr8 poem! Continue to write Drax!

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      des donnelly 9 years ago from NYC....

      Iðunn so one at a time since they twist and turn a little...

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      des donnelly 9 years ago from NYC....

      Mr M it would appear that they are all the rage now, however I am almost sure that they would be tedious, but...

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      MrMarmalade 9 years ago from Sydney

      I did get mixed up with one when I was a tad younger. Thankfully they disapeared off the horrizon

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      Iðunn 9 years ago

      I'd like to hear the few more lines.