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Poem - The Kisses

Updated on April 28, 2012

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She kissed me

And I thought

oh f**k here we go again

tongue shoving

Slobbering

tongue biting

teeth knocking

where have they been

who trained then

I almost wake up at night some amateur kissing me

And I think, this idiot

Where is the gun when you need it

Then I remember Bernie Mc...

Such finesse, so controlled

a little pressure, not enough, not too much

I felt faint, even at this year's range

Forget how a woman looks

the kisses the kisses

can be divine.....

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      Kavita Trivedi 7 years ago from London

      I like the story telling and journey throughout the poem

      Oh the first kiss of a first love is always so memorable!

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      des donnelly 7 years ago from NYC....

      Hey Kavita, thanks, this story is from about 25+ years ago so it strange how a kiss lingers...

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      gusripper 7 years ago

      The first kiss is the counter for all the next kisses

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      tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      Kisses, kisses... I love kisses ! :)

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      des donnelly 7 years ago from NYC....

      @gusripper Thanks, this reminds me of Byron's quote... "In her first passion woman loves her lover, in all the other all she loves is love." Lord Byron, 1788-1824, English poet, Don Juan

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      des donnelly 7 years ago from NYC....

      @Tantrum gracias.. besos y abrazos ;-)

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      grillrepair 7 years ago from florida

      Thank you again.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      something special in a kiss, for sure. this one sounds quite unforgettable.

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      des donnelly 7 years ago from NYC....

      Thanks I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s ..it's only about 30 years ago or so :-)

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      Tara O'Hara 7 years ago

      b-e-a-u-t-f-u-l x

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      des donnelly 7 years ago from NYC....

      thanks very tara o'hara... such a nice name :-)

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      mythbuster 7 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

      *mwah*

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      des donnelly 7 years ago from NYC....

      thanks Mythbuster :-)

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      mythbuster 7 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

      I wasn't going to compete with your memories, Drax, so a simple *mwah* was in order...

      :)

      It's all I could think of after reading "kiss literature" or "kiss poetry."

      I love poetry but tend to be left with "impressions" and "feelings" rather than words, once I finish reading poetry...when I read many of the comments others leave under "Poems," "Poetry" and "Poetic" hubs, I'm absolutely STUNNED at how people can find their words when I cannot...

      I just wanted you to know, Drax, that my lack of comments to your many written works in no way represents "lack of readership." Now I suppose I shouldn't just go *mwah-ing* around hubpages just because I can't think of any words...

      ummm...

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      SilverGenes 6 years ago

      Every once or twice in a lifetime there is a kiss like this - lovely! :-)

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      des donnelly 6 years ago from NYC....

      Oh Silver... probably only once... and maybe even then we do not realise until years after.... :-(

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      It's amazing how "a kiss" may differ from all others. Not sure what it is - the texture of the lips, the amount of pressure, the passion restrained just enough but not too much, the scent of the skin, the time of day, whether or not it's a bit illegitimate, whether or not it's expected or a surprise - and what-all of various elements it has - but - yes - all others are inevitably to be measured by it thenceforth...

      I liked you poem, Drax.

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      des donnelly 6 years ago from NYC....

      Nellieanna thank you very much for the nice comment...

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      samiaali 6 years ago

      Hello Drax, This is a beautiful poem! Thank you.

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      des donnelly 6 years ago from NYC....

      Hi Samiaali... that is lovely of you to say so... thanks :-)

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      LaurieDawn 6 years ago

      Drax,

      I found your poem beautiful and bringing back such wonderful memories of that first kiss. Thank you for making my day brighter with poetry. Everyone should read a poem a day.

      Well wishes,

      Laurie

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      des donnelly 6 years ago from NYC....

      Laurie

      thank you very much... the first kiss or a special kiss is hard to escape... and yes for sure everyone should read some poetry every day, it can colour your day in a different way..

      Thanks

      Drax

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      lol If you have a habit of having someone kiss you out of the blue I would say hallelujah and be done.

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      des donnelly 6 years ago from NYC....

      Jaggedfrost... thanks for the comment, it was more to do with reminiscing about a long lost kiss than anything else.. and then imagining the alternative.. like an If... in another dimension...

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      IĆ°unn 6 years ago

      It would be difficult to have a 'habit' of controlling the actions of others, I would think. Perhaps the wordz your guest meant were good fortune, happenstance, or the comment itself a hint of envy that you inpsire kisses generally from exotic and extraordinary women.

      And kissing you out of the 'blue'? So specific. I could see women wishing to kiss you out of the burgundy, the chartreuse, the regal purple or even the tricolour. So many colours, so little time to kiss. ;)

      Hallelujah.

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      des donnelly 6 years ago from NYC....

      Hey Iðunn .. sorry running behind as usual... yes who knows.. thought patterns are often haphazard... ;-)

      Yes too many colours not enough kissing... lol...

      Thanks I...

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      starflakes 6 years ago from Florida

      amazing it is what imprints the kiss can do a heart; a soul ...

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      des donnelly 5 years ago from NYC....

      Hey Starflakes.. I must have been away star gazing.. sorry I missed this comment, it is wild i can see the moment of this in my mind from 30+ years ago...

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      des donnelly 5 years ago from NYC....

      Hey Starflakes.. I must have been away star gazing.. sorry I missed this comment, it is wild i can see the moment of this in my mind from 30+ years ago...

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      des donnelly 5 years ago from NYC....

      Hey Starflakes.. I must have been away star gazing.. sorry I missed this comment, it is wild... I can see the moment of this (these !!) kisses in my mind from 30+ years ago...

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      Great write and memories evoked with your words. Cheers.

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      des donnelly 5 years ago from NYC....

      Hey Sligobay... An bhfuil tú go maith? thanks for the comment... that's the thing about kisses they never go away..

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      Rosemary Amrhein 5 years ago from Boston, MA

      Kisses can be divine

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      No kiss is useless. Its at least useful as a bad example. If there were no bad kisses, how would we know a good one when we got it? Drax, I linked your Hub on my new kisses Hub. Slainte.

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      des donnelly 5 years ago from NYC....

      @Blondey.. they can and should be... :-)

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      des donnelly 5 years ago from NYC....

      @Sligobay... yes the good and the bad and the sweet kisses are always there in the memory... thanks for that link I will do likewise... :-)

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