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Updated on February 06, 2015

Lies

God cleared his throat,

leaned forward in his chair,

ghosts would float,

death would fear,

chills would grin wickedly,

religion lies,

evil ties,

heaven cries,

God tries,

as humanity fails,

Jesus would cover his eyes,

if it weren’t for the nails.

© 2015 Frank Atanacio

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Nice poem Frank. I particularly love the lines "Jesus would cover his eyes,

      if it weren’t for the nails." great stuff.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Thanks Jodah good morning :)

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      Oh how this hits the nail on the head. The poor state of humanity and God being heartbroken at where his creations have gone.

      Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I agree with Jodah. I thought of the young pilot ISIS burned alive. OMG what evil is out there? This is great Frank....

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      Bill Holland 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

      All I could think of while reading this was the song "Lies" by the Knickerbockers back in 1966....on a darker note, you said a mouthful with very few words. Perfectly stated...hatred, horror, vengeance, inhumanity....and for what? What changes when we kill one another? We've been doing it for thousands of years, and what has changed?

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      Sara Sarwar Riaz 2 years ago from Michigan, USA

      Such a powerful theme of imagination compiled so effectively in a brief assemblage of words… Loved it !

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      Smilealot 2 years ago

      An awful lot said in a very few words, and that made this all the more powerful..very well done Frank:-))

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      Clive Williams 2 years ago from Nibiru

      hey frank, i wonder if he is really covering his eyes....sigh

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      Chris Mills 2 years ago from Colorado Springs, CO until the end of March

      Wow Frank, every line of this is loaded with unstated meanings. Good job.

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      FitnezzJim 2 years ago from Fredericksburg, Virginia

      What a powerful set of words.

      "Jesus would cover his eyes if it weren’t for the nails."

      That right there is the State of the World.

      Well stated.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Til and Always thank you so much for stopping by and checking out my lies :) Frank

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      Peggy Woods 2 years ago from Houston, Texas

      You said much in few words. As Bill wrote, the horrors, lies, atrocities never seem to end. Your last lines are particularly poignant.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      billy and Sara... thank you so much for visiting my lies

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      smilealot good to see you reading my lies, Cam, thanks so much for the visit, Clive nice to have you aboard, Peggy W thanks so much for checking my lies.. welcome fitnezzjim for joining this read

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      Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Whoa! This is an epic poem with few words, each so precise and hard-hitting with incontrovertible truth. Voted way up!

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      Eric Dierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      You surely do cause one to think hard about something of real import.

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Brilliant! I am blown away, dear Frank ... in a good way. This is your best poem ever in my mind. Each line is powerful in and of itself, and the entire poem is superb. It is the sign of a great poet to use less words for greater impact.

      Memorable one here.

      Up ++++ tweeting, pining, G+ and sharing

      "Jesus wept."

      Hugs and much love always

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      stella vadakin 2 years ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Hi, I think Jesus would cover his eyes today. Nice poem with real truth told.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Wow....each powerful word like a nail driving home. So many atrocities executed in his name. Frank , eloquent and impressive.

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      FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

      Loved it, particularly two things -- God leaning forward in his chair and the last line. Wow! Frank, this was powerful.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you Genna East and Eric for readig my lies..:)

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Faith, always good to see you my friend.. thank you for checking out my lies.. ladyguitar welcome and thank you for the comment.... tobusiness and Flourish it's not complete until you guys leave your comments bless you all :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Frank. what a beautiful, powerful and moving poem. Voted it up.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you blossoms

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      This is a great sermon for the worship service. Though short, the congregation would not move when it ends; they would spend the usual time to contemplate its message. Powerful!

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      CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Wonderful, powerful and very thought provoking.

      Voting up and passing it along.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you MsDora and CrisSp for checking out my lies..:)

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      Anna Haven 2 years ago from Scotland

      A fair snapshot of our society nowadays. Sadly. Captured perfectly and those last two lines were hard hitting and perfectly placed.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Anna..bless you

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      The Examiner-1 2 years ago

      Just as I was getting into it Frank, it was the last line :-( I voted it up and pinned it up.

      Kevin

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      Examiner thank you for reading my lies

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      No words simply, Hats off my genius friend out there. Awesome ...LIES seriously.

      Shared and votes way up ahead

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      LOL thanks for telling..I mean reading lies dghbrh

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      Tim Mitchell 2 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Powerful and humbling. Sharing is a delight . . . thank for sharing an open door . . .

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you tsmog

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 2 years ago from Lagos

      A very touching poem. Then again, it is all about the lies.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thanks so much Uban for reading good to see you

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      Patricia Scott 2 years ago from sunny Florida

      Reading this early in the morning is quite an eye opener for sure.

      Yes, He probably would..and He would remind us He is here for us and to pick our sometimes selfish, sometimes unkind, sometimes unthinking selves up and do better.

      I love the succinct way you have woven the words to create such a power-filled message.

      Voted up++++ and shared g+

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you Pstraubi for stopping by my lies :)

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      Peg Cole 2 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Thoughtful and reflective of the state of things, Frank. You sent a powerful message in so few words. Loved the photos, too.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you pegcole...bless you

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      Evelia Veronica Rivera 2 years ago from Bridgeport, CT

      Short and "sweet" sir, always a pleasure

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thank you mam...

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      Lee Cloak 2 years ago

      Sublime words and lovely work, very interesting piece, thanks!

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Lee Cloak

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      William Thomas 24 months ago from That Great Primordial Smash UP of This and That Which Gave Rise To All Beings and All Things!

      This is a short poem, Frank, but I must confess I'll have to think about this for a while. Of course, that is not a bad thing at all.

      There's at least a couple of ways to take that part about how Jesus would cover his eyes but for the nails.

      Take it easy.

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      Frank Atanacio 24 months ago from Shelton

      thank you again winged for leaving footprints on my pages bless you

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      Audrey Howitt 23 months ago from California

      Such a powerfully emotive piece Frank!

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      Frank Atanacio 23 months ago from Shelton

      Audrey thank you

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      Jo_Goldsmith11 20 months ago

      I am a great admirer of yours since your April poetry challenge.

      This is so breathtaking to read. And it does leave one to feel pause.

      And reflect about how can we stop the violence from getting worse yet.

      So many invoke the name of God for their personal reasons.

      I hope that those same ones will do so for all humanity.

      Up, shared and thank you for giving me pause.

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      Frank Atanacio 20 months ago from Shelton

      thank you Jo :)

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      Missy Smith 20 months ago from Florida

      Great words with great rhyme. Really good poem! :)

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      Frank Atanacio 20 months ago from Shelton

      thanks Mssy

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      Dana Tate 19 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Excellent! simple, direct, and to the point. Both chilling and awesome!

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      Frank Atanacio 19 months ago from Shelton

      thank you Dana for reading my lies

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