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Pure Bliss

Updated on July 30, 2013


My lips are stained forever with the touch of your kiss,

How I imagined you and I in the world of pure bliss…

We dance in the moonlight,

We walk hand in hand,

Our feet gently caressing,

The soft beautiful sand…

Hawaii a dream,

Where most wish they could be…

So fortunate for us,

To have been born here.

Very fortunate indeed…

We laugh,

We play,

We talk like the time never ends,

We enjoy each others company,

The new day begin…

Boy how time flies…

When you’re having so much fun,

Don’t you wish we could just lie here…?

Under the beautiful sun!

It’s time to go our separate ways,

But we find it hard to part…

We don’t want to miss each others company.

We don’t know where to start…

Too hard to say good-bye,

We both begin to cry…

Like it’s the last time we’ll ever see each other,

And we don't even know why.

We fell In love that day...

Those feelings, will never go away.

It's time for me to let you go....

This is hard for me to say.

Tonight I will need to pray.

Good-bye my love... I say...

Written by: Jlono ©2011


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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      @ Astra Nomik~ Yes,sad ending indeed. This was an experience that I will never forget.


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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Bliss is a mountain peak in love that is so beautiful when we get there, we never want to leave. I loved this, and the end was sad. No one wants love to ever end...

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Thank you so much Epigramman! It's always great hubbing with you and reading your hubs.



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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ...well it's pure poetic bliss that I feel whenever I read ANY of your words - and it's true - by the way you write - you certainly have a lot of love in your proud and noble heart!

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      Emily40 7 years ago

      Wow very nice..*smiles*

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      Kader 7 years ago from Algeria

      great poem

      a hillarious starting and falling end or breaking , the first line there is a sweet melody goes the hope movement of the couple till the joy then suddenly things are falling to separation which really is shocking one, hope that you go to avoid the unexpected tragedy. It s really beautiful poem the music is expressing the thought of the poet and vibrates with lovers hearts

      wish you success