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Updated on July 20, 2012
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Rain - Haiku

Rain - A three part Haiku


Rain without rhythm creating synergy

Silver drops satiating the core so earthy

Let rains clean the sin.

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Effluence making earth so thirsty

Azure sky is crying to appear ultimately

Let rains clean the ignorance.

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Spring of eternity touch vanity

Crimes here make Almighty sad so utterly

Let rains clean our souls.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks@pringoooals for your comment and loving the poem.

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      Karina 5 years ago from Edinburgh

      It's a really nice poem. So sad and giving hope in the same time? Loved it!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Shining......for stopping by and making time to comment on the Haiku. its much valuable for me.....well magic and rain.....hope you have some rain ahead.

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      Thank you @ Spy, dear friend.....for liking the Haiku....same here....i too love the rains

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      i love to hear the drops of rains.. lolvey haiku.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Here's hoping this wonderful haiku will spin some magic and make it rain!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ daydreamer13 for your stopped b y and commented on my hub.

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      daydreamer13 5 years ago

      I love this! What a way with words! Well done !

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ CrazedNovelist (Audrey ) for your kind words. I do feel that Rain is the powerful massage of God to explain that everything needs cleaning. The mother earth looks so beautiful drenched in Rain.

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      Thank you @ Civil War Bob...for voting up and all. Your words are much appreciated and its great that you stopped by and commented.

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      Thank you @ Olde Cashmere for you stopped by and commented on this. I am very new in this line of poetry. Your words are great encouragement for me.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Beautifully done dghbrh, I enjoyed this haiku and your imagery was rich. Voted up, beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)

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      Civil War Bob 5 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      Well done, dghbrh...voted up, beautiful, interesting. May your prayer like haikus be answered!

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      A.E. Williams 5 years ago from Hampton, GA

      This is so beautiful! I love the idea of purification through rain. It's so pure and comes from a pure place. It's only natural that it's cleansing. Very cool Haiku!! Look forward to seeing you around the hubs!

      -Aubrey