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ribbons of return

Updated on August 20, 2011

ribbon

laced through my very skin

untie me

and undress me

and ill invite you in.

enter darkened Forrest

and swing me to the song

that hardens the softest skin

...................its been far too long

push me into bark

and rip away my tear

drown me in the deepest depths

of whispers in my ear

feel with me the findings

of digitary skill

and number one my passion

till silences are killed.

meet with me the maker of the everlasting heat

swing me up and suck me down

until i catch the beat.

make the merry gentlemen

blush with simple hearts

innocence and malice

never far apart.

soul the very journey

of the orgasmatic vein

and when the rockings over

take me once again

lace me up with feathers

and conquer me with black

push my aching heart

against the ones Ive stacked

bleed with me the berries

of the truth that lies beneath

and soil every part of me

that chooses to believe.



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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Beautiful my friend. Always great to read your words.

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      Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

      Hey Pink, another great expression of feelings/emotions. Always a pleasure to see what you come up with. I like the picture too. Very elegant. :)

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      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Nice! The picture grabbed my eyeballs and your flowing words never let me go. The music, images, and poem all work so well together. Outstanding!

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      seicheprey 5 years ago

      Really well done, Pink. Thanks for posting it.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanx JL, that means alot.

      Reynold Jay- not a fan, a friend! and im checking out the link asap.

      cags- cmon what can i say lol. and i also found the photo to be very elegant.

      poetvix- im so glad you liked it!

      seichepray- havnt heard from you in a while! thanks!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      by the way reynold jay, dont put misleading links to your own hubs on my page again. if your going to visit me, please be honest about it

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      .josh. 5 years ago

      Wow, pink. Beautifully written, and I love the accompaniment of the song (though I was expecting the Smashing Pumpkins) - really well done, you've certainly earned yourself another follower.

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      mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

      Always a wonderful read. You have such a beautiful talent.

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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thought it was awesome. I loved how it flowed

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks josh!

      mikielikie- have i told you your one of my favs? lol

      4elements- thank you so much. i get that my pieces dont ecactly roll off the tongue all of the time, and im pretty proud of this one. it flowed from me like water. :) .

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      a very sexy, very sultry poem here.

      "make the merry gentlemen

      blush with simple hearts

      innocence and malice

      never far apart." I loved this line. because to be innocent can also mean to be easily corrupted. or having an impressionable mind. open to influence and temptation.

      "Soil every part of me..." =]

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, have i told ya i love ya nikki?

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      hehe hmm you have now! :)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...oh my oh my ...on this dark and stormy night by the lake of erie we are under a tornado watch with heavy rains and high winds and this piece, quite possibly my favorite by you, has literally taken my breath away.

      Must share this one on my Bookface page with the entire lucky human race my dear Steph Muse Shakespeare.

      lake erie time 11:22pm

      p.s - such an elegant title, wish I had thought of that one

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      your favorite, really? :) thank you so much, its one of my favs of mine too! im honored that you shared it on facebook. Were in store for some weather here too tonight. after the earthquake this week (which i am not used to) i am feeling ready for a much needed stormy night. i hope it gets wicked out there. you know, safe, but wicked. well, its 218pm here and im gettting ready for a sweet sleep. nappy napoo time for me, back to the darkened forest just for a little while....

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      Jennuhlee 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Wow, I don't know how you did this, but I WISH so badly I had written it myself, amazing, simply amazing.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      yea, there are a lot of things i read here on HP that make me cringe with jealousy, lol. "Why not me" lol. But thankz. You have your own amazing ability to move, and i was coveting a few of your pieces last night.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Inspired by love and war. hope you don't mind

      In a time without time I fall,

      deeper into a dream with you.

      Knowing nothing but nothing at all,

      finding my way to your truth.

      I burn in your waters,

      drowning in flames just the same.

      Falling to stand on my feet,

      racing a race I can't win.

      Becoming my hopes in your light,

      lighting my shadows in dreams.

      Taking the hand that denies,

      falling away from love and war.

      Johnny Love.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      you know your one of few that i dont mind prosing on my page.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Well we had a moment in a time without time. In a world without life, in a dream without imagination.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      hey loving the picture, although you look a little south jersey in it. lol

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