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seret secret seret

Updated on July 8, 2012

can you keep a secret?

well keep it far from me

the time has come

to be undone

and Ive no time for thee

ill tell you little stories...

have you heard the one about the truth?

sprinkled very lightly

with everything but you

dim and dull as mud

dripping dirty on my rug

id give you more but all i have

is this box of half hearted hugs

remember when we laughed?

i cant so fu*k yourself

all those little moments blown away

by unsophisticated smells

i bury memories of you

behind bricked up basement walls

hopefully no one ever finds them

there just murdered thoughts of you is all

i pictured you quite different

when i thought about the future

saw us smiling

why am i crying? oh that's right....ur fu*king putrid.

i sing me little lullabies and bury you to sleep

who'd have known id valley for your death

so unbecoming of me

but i guess that's just the way it goes,

when you've been as scorned as me

tweedle deedle deedle dum

tweedle deedle dee

buried inside darkened forest

you'll never make it out alive

just remember when your there,

how hard i fu*king tried

so apologise not to me, for ill not say a word

your poisoned blahs mean nothing more

than seven day old curds.


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    • 4elements profile image

      4elements 5 years ago

      This reminded me of anger. i understand the feelings it comes from. Awesome

    • tom hellert profile image

      tom hellert 5 years ago from home


      you like when we look at your stuff huh....holy


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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      very creative write up, voted up

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago

      hey guys no time to sign in, was on facebook n i have tons of stuff to do but your all such amazing writers and still to this day -and i know ie said this before- i get so shocked and flattered that anyone would even look at my stuff. love you all!!!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Heartbreaking. I feel overwhelmed, it's just such a deep feeling of hurt, and it's a tough road to find the path back to the light! So expressive and deep, awesome!

    • tom hellert profile image

      tom hellert 5 years ago from home


      Um.... you said the "f" word...ooooo Im tellin...but who do I tell?

      ... I'll have to figure it out...


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      pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

      Stunning use of words. So very creative. Thanks.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Beautiful..voted up!

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      stormoverdestiny 5 years ago from Deep within the heart of the storm

      Another amazing piece my love. No matter what way you write or where it comes from you sew words together with the purest threads of emotion.