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softly she spoke

Updated on January 5, 2011

 Softly she spoke

as if no one should hear

with a tuck of her hair

behind her left ear

"dreamers are comming"

slowly she winked

"but arent all of us dreamers?"

she and i said in sync

her laughter like bells

her voice soft and still

smelling of honey

skin of pure milk

The way she moves round me

like bubbles on air

the way she assures me

with a swipe of her hair

she glistens and shimmers

hair of red

skin of white

eyes all a glimmer

a majestic sight

with a pat of her hand

she assures me all's right

and everything will be fine

after tonight

reaching out for embrace

i pull her in tight

and hold on to her body

with all of my might

i awake truely startled

my arms wraped around me

i can smell her hair still

on my own little body

looking towards the mirror

its plain as can see

the woman in my dream

ha, it was me.

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    • the pink umbrella profile imageAUTHOR

      the pink umbrella 

      7 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      self love is my reality, i love myself more than a normal person should.

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      sligobay 

      7 years ago from east of the equator

      I see the influence of epigram here with the surprise ending. Self love is a beautiful dream and hopefully reality.

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      tom hellert 

      7 years ago from home

      PU,

      ya my boys are busy with sports and fighting each other- the screams of "idiot", "fool" and "STOP"

      keep me jumping- when they get older you get a little more time but- there are allot more functions and events to attend as well.. but it is all good when you see them doing and enjoying stuff makes me sound old.. i remember back when they were just kids

      cheeryness and happy thoughts

      TH

    • the pink umbrella profile imageAUTHOR

      the pink umbrella 

      7 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Haha, thanx Tom. Not that ive been "writing up a storm" or anything. Too much mom stuff to do i guess. Thats ok, i guess i can resent him for monopolizing my time when he gets older. LMAO. As if i dont love it, right?

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      tom hellert 

      7 years ago from home

      Pink,

      ya still got it-not that you ever lost it but ya still show ya ot it-i like the twist at the end-

      TH

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ......a very sensuous read and written with such poetic eloquence that it takes my breath away!!!!

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      dwaynehood 

      7 years ago

      hey pink thanks for follow my post..i m very happy to join you..because i like your all hub and i regularly waiting for your updates..

    • the pink umbrella profile imageAUTHOR

      the pink umbrella 

      7 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      sure dwaynehood!

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      dwaynehood 

      7 years ago from 9535 Stoney Ridge Lane, JENKINTOWN, PA-19046,USA

      hey Pink can you be my best friend...

    • the pink umbrella profile imageAUTHOR

      the pink umbrella 

      7 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      jaymeyaroch- thats what im sayin. you turn 27 and realize you need to be your own best friend!

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      Jaymeyaroch 

      7 years ago from Somewhere between today and yesterday.

      Hooray for self love! This was simply magnificent!

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      Dallas W Thompson 

      7 years ago from Bakersfield, CA

      Your words paint vivid imageries. Thanks for sharing.

    • the pink umbrella profile imageAUTHOR

      the pink umbrella 

      7 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Haha, i know that ive said that i try not to correct my work, for fear that i will start re writing it, but a typo in the title is just sloppy writing!!!! Thanx for sticking by me any wayz guys!!!!

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      kimberlyslyrics 

      7 years ago

      Pink you truly are a beautiful writer and your craft continues to be inspiring and thought provoking

      glad you share it with us

      kimberly

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      sam3m 

      7 years ago from New York

      nicely done. great flow, humor. i seldom read poetry but yours caught the right way. thank you

    • tnderhrt23 profile image

      tnderhrt23 

      7 years ago

      I saw it to but enjoyed the poem so much I didn't care!

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      zzron 

      7 years ago from Houston, TX.

      Really cool Pink, I saw the typo, I was confused. Good that you caught it.

    • the pink umbrella profile imageAUTHOR

      the pink umbrella 

      7 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      wow, typo in the title. glad i cought that one before anyone else saw it!!!! lol.

    • tnderhrt23 profile image

      tnderhrt23 

      7 years ago

      I could feel the magic in this one! I loved your imagery, rhythm and flow too! Superb!

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      Cagsil 

      7 years ago from USA or America

      I see you've been talking to yourself again. LOL! (j/k) Very nicely done. As you already know, I enjoy learning more about you and am grateful for you sharing, whenever you feel like sharing. It's a pleasure to read you and to get to know you. :) Thumbs up! :) :D

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