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solitude

Updated on February 22, 2016

As the sun sets in the vicinity,
loneliness sets in, to test my tenacity.

Every night, it catches up,
since we split up.

I won't declare that this agony, is fine,
But it's my own, on my own.

I will regain or get lost,
But I will not shed a tear, another minute.

It's alright.
Solitude is my soul mate, again tonight.

Still, I would state, till its twilight,
God is great.

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      noone 10 months ago

      Quite meaningful hari ji. Solitude is ur only mate in the lonely world of today. Just wat is needed is a strong state of mind. Beautifully written.

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      Vishnu 14 months ago

      Creation of a beautiful mind.Solitude is a great state of being.Being alone is though not necessarily lonely.It can be contemplative and awakening too!

      Thanks,Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you missy.

      - Hari

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      Missy Smith 16 months ago from Florida

      I really like this one, Hari. I guess we all get lonely sometimes, but it is our driving force of hope that keeps us going. Very Nice!

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      Hari Prasad S 16 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks genna for your comments. You are right. Solitude is difficult on is and we count on the lord to get us a companionship. Thanks for your visit.

      - Hari

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      Genna East 16 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      We have all experienced this; and our faith that gives strength. Beautiful poem. :-)

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      Hari Prasad S 16 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you chitrangada. Wish you a very happy happening year too.

      - Hari

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      Chitrangada Sharan 17 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Beautiful and expressive poem!

      We all go through this---Solitude is a part of life! And in the end we come out of it through our inner strength.

      Thanks for sharing and a very Happy New Year to you!

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you devika for appreciation.

      - Hari

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      Devika Primić 17 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      The reality is in front of us. You greatly express a powerful message.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks ruby. You have rightly said it.

      - Hari

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 17 months ago from Southern Illinois

      We all feel the struggle of loneliness when solitude abounds. Beautiful!

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks frank for the visit and appreciation after a while.

      - Hari

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      Frank Atanacio 17 months ago from Shelton

      what an inspirational poem my friend.. loved it :)

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks jodah for your visit and being appreciative. It means a lot. :-)

      Abba are my favourite. There songs are so meaningful and music is so groovy.

      I am happily married. ha ha.

      - Hari

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      John Hansen 17 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Nights are often the most difficult to deal with when a relationship has ended. That's when the real feeling of solitude is felt, but yes God is great and will give you strength. Nice expression of emotion Hari. "Knowing Me, Knowing You" is one of my favourite ABBA songs.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you eric,

      for being such wonderful critic. :-)

      - Hari

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      Eric Dierker 17 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Wonderful piece. To conjure up such great meaningful emotion is a true talent.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you surabhi and wish you a great 2016.

      - hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 17 months ago

      Okay, Hari bhai - Congratulations on your 50th hub. Wonderfully expressed here. Nice poem. Happy 2016.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks. And i wish you more.

      - Hari

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      manatita44 17 months ago from london

      I try, Bro ...I try. Thank you. My best wishes for the start of 2016 and beyond...

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks manatita bro.

      you are always my first and best pal,

      in our realm of poetic endeavour.

      :-)

      - Hari

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      manatita44 17 months ago from london

      What a beautiful poem! For many of us, including myself, the struggle between night and day is very real and it is indeed part of this wonderful journey. You seem to know this. Hari Om!

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