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stay back for my sake

Updated on December 18, 2015

Inspired by poem from Faiz ahmed Faiz


o! my pain, o! my love,
stay with me for my sake.

Relaxed night is dawning, unconcerned,
singing, teasing, laughing at my condition,
hopes filling, my heart is bleeding,
turning, the sky red.

like a child, filled with emotion,
nothing is calming,
this night, isn't listening,
stay with me for my sake.

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      Vishnu 14 months ago

      Yearning is high, wait belies.

      Good words

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks missy.

      - Hari

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      Missy Smith 17 months ago from Florida

      Yes, that yearn we all have. lol...Beautiful Hari!

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      ha ha. surabhi. Yes for a change.

      - Hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 17 months ago

      Bro, I see your trend is changing. Ha ha ha! It is wonderful. Maza aa gaya! Bahut khoob... bang on! Bang on dude! Loved it :)

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks devika, genna. I am thankful to you all for your lovely comments .

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks manatita bro for all the appreciation.

      - hari

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      manatita44 17 months ago from london

      What a sweet and loving entreating! Expressed longing. Excellent!

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      Genna East 17 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I like the sense of imagery you use in your poetry. You have a unique style. :-)

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      Devika Primić 17 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      You greatly express emotions in such a meaningful way.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks shaloo.

      - hari

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      Shaloo Walia 17 months ago

      Yearning of a lover beautifully expressed!

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