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Take from my wretched heart

Updated on March 24, 2012

OH Moon over my wretched Heart

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In the Mouth of the full


Moon

Each drop of me

Is collected in a

Body

That winds through

Routines of every day

Battered within

Complete life

In its essence

Hidden from sight

With pains for

Seeking

Pleasures

From till now

Disturbingly calm

I stare at the

Moon

To be sure it is

You

I give you my heart

My Heart Is over the moon

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I sit on the moon


Oh my dearest

Wish

Is you

As two hearts

Waiting

Smooth as silk

Hair pulled

Loosely back

Scarcely visible

With that sheen

Of togetherness

And You

Moon shining thorugh the trees..

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The Darkness


Of the

Wretched heart

Scared the

Vanishes of my

Memories

It is late

as I

Draw the blinds

Waving slowly

From my

Life

I whirl

From the fall

Of the wretched heart

If only to get back to

You

┬ęCopyright 2012 by POET DEBORAH BROOKS-LANGFORD

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      Jamie Brock 5 years ago from Texas

      I love reading your poetry Deborah.. it's beautiful and sad at the same time. You are very talented and convey your feelings so well with your words :)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....well I've got to settle down a bit and stop composing the raunchy - naughty stuff and learn from a sublime artist like you Deborah - lol - of which you already know I do - a) capable of writing the real 'purty' stuff and b)learn from you and it's rubbed off indeed - you have class and style in every word you write ....... lake erie time 11:56pm

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      At the moment I am at a loss of words! So i can just say brilliant work, voted up and shared!!

      You are one delightful fellow hubber.... hats off!!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up, awesome and beautiful for sure. Such lovely words Debby and the pictures and video all tied up in one very pretty package.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Thank you Jamie..

      Colin.. Epi.. you have your own style.. You give me inspiration.. but I do blush sometimes.. LOl

      rahul0324 thank you for voting up and sharing I am honored

      Gypsy.. thank you my friend. for voting up youa re so awesome

      Blessing to you

      Debbie

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Debbie, touching, and beautifully done as usual. Voting up

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      girltalksshop 5 years ago

      I love the way you put down your feelings into words through poetry. Very well put and defined. : ) Beautiful poem!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Tobusiness thank you for voting up

      Girltalk.. thank you for visiting and commenting

      Be blessed

      Debbie

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Your poetry is beautiful, and emotional. That is rare these days. Thank you so much for sharing with us.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      'My heart is over the moon' Loved it...

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Amazing pic.. I love the picture.. The poem too.. gUSH!.. This picture is beautiful!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow completely awesome Deborah. Just how do you do it?!

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      Mary Hyatt 5 years ago from Florida

      Another beautiful poem you have done here. I envy your ability to write so wonderfully. Goodnight.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I loved your beautiful poems and the illustrations were gorgeous, too. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Drtruthman 5 years ago from Harlingen, Texas

      As usual Debbie, beautiful in both word and structure.

      Everything flows, photos and music. Love it all. I voted UP all across. Lee

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      I love this.. this was fantastic... would have blown me away had I not been blown away already...

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Michele thank you for visiting and commenting

      always exploring always nice to see you

      Cap so glad you like the picture and the poem LOl

      acaetnna so good to see you.

      Mary. You have a wonderful day

      Blossom thank you for voting up

      Lee.. always good to see you

      Frank I am blown away with your work,.

      blessings to you all

      Debbie

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      "Pleasures

      From till now

      Disturbingly calm

      I stare at the

      Moon"

      Your words paint such beautiful but sad images of broken love.

      Voted up and away.

      Take Care :)

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Your poetry comes from the depths of you, Deb! I'm hubbin' on this one a lot - as i am a 'moongirl' myself and that photo is - omg - the most stunning! Love hurts, but - you know what 'they' say...'better to have loved and lost...' blahblah! Lol..

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Sue thank you for voting up..

      ImKarn you are right it's better to have loved and lost

      Be blessed

      Debbie

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      So very poetic, passionate and romantic. Loved the poems.Voted up.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      vellur.. thank you.. I am so glad you like my poems.. Let me visit you.

      Debbie

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      Laura WIttreich 5 years ago

      I love reading your poetry can just say brilliant work

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      thank you my sweet laura

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