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The Catch

Updated on July 26, 2012

THE TRUTH ABOUT LOVE


Life has it's reasons,

but Life has no rhymes

Love can feel good

Love can hurt sometimes


When the pain feels good,

thats the catch... you see

To get the one you love

thats the way it must be


What's the reason ?

Her beauty suckered you in

Where is the the rhyme ?

the win.. made your head.. spin


There I was... writing

words on the internet

floating and looking for...

something different to get.


Yes, I was so lost

in the world of cyberspace

trying to find myself

or just looking for a place


A fine place I knew....

that it would be where

I would find your love waiting

with hurt and pain there


Ahh yes... The Catch....

It's what we don't think about

the real truth about love

it's the pain... we can't do without.








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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you dotti, you probably won't red this but your comments are awesome just like your writes , so full of splendor..

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Wow. this is so poignant and full of truth! Awesome is the word here, besides beautiful..... You've hit the nail on the head with your idea of love...it can indeed be the rose, the thorn, or both! Keep writing, Michael. you have a unique, captivating style, that always touches our heart, in your work, as well as just being yourself. hugs. Voted up,of course... dotti

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Your poem is heart touching and interesting Micheal. I love to read your work . God bless you!

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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

      cleaner3,

      Love should be without pain from one to the other. Love is about caring and sharing. If loving causes pain then run as fast as you can

      to someone who knows a good man when she sees him---and this is my opinion.

      Your work is alway a refreshing journey I am pleased to take. Great passion with words---write a poem where you win.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you max, you know that you are on of my most faithful followers, always there to support me . love you max.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, so true, the catch is always there. But without risk and trial after trial there won't be a winner. We learn from past mistakes, never give up! Sharp poem, very expressive and touching, hugs my friend!

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      I hear- and I shall be safe my friend :-)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the comments. you be safe now hear!!

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Nice poem Michael-Love can hurt so much at times but when we look back, it's always worth the risk. I hope you have a beautiful weekend my friend.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @soconfident, thanks for the comments.

      @ Katrine, thanks Katrine always look forward to your comments !

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      I truly believe that in our life we meet and come across people for a reason, in order for us to become what we were meant to become.

      Lovely and deep writing Michael. Keep well.

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      Derrick Bennett 5 years ago

      Nice choice of words. Voted up and beautiful