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~the diaries of a broken Heart 2~ the Reply From beyond the veil

Updated on July 25, 2010

My image of how Augustine looks like :D
My image of how Augustine looks like :D

Inspired by So many songs by Entwine (though they aren't metal bands) Please listen to bleeding for the cure & bitter sweet ~~

Dear Amelie

I read your letter with a broken heart. A thousand times I gasped for air as it tore me apart. And now as you see those smudges on the little paper within your hands, know that I have shed tears so black that the ink I write with looks pretty light to the innocent human eye. I am on my way to say so stuff that can never be said out in the open. I loved you so much but we had our time stolen from us. Unable to comprehend the treachery from the sky, but I had to go. And now as I watch you falling down where you lose all what you are I can’t help but cry and see my heart burn with every nail that grows in silence within your heart. Deep inside in my mind I fall deep and lose track of time every time I see you trembling. It hurts so deep when the pain is so treacherous so deep that it makes you sometimes lose all the reasons to help you hold on. In the cold tomb stone I hear your cries, and as I shed tears I hear the angel of mercy mocking me. Although I can never find the reason behind this injustice, the pain you endure today makes me turn in my grave every single time I hear your cries replay in my mind. I can’t help it but curse those shackles that keep me bound to the underworld. And every time I try to take a look beyond that veil that separates your world from mine I am presented with a door that shuts in my face. I try to race the time and cross beyond yet all what I get is failure to follow the light .

I can’t help it the weakness has dug deep inside and now all I have to hear is the little angel’s laughs as they use my love to you to drug me deep into death. The treacherous laughs make my heart sink into agony that can’t be explained not even by mere human language for I have thought you could be the one for me yet now as I look at the burden I descended and inflicted on you I damn my heart for making you suffer. I can’t help it any more these tears keep on falling down on me washing my face making me tremble beneath death six feet under.

I’ve tried to cry for help to escape the fades yet all what i have received is more loss and darkness. It is one big trial for me and you yet I don’t know if I can survive this.

One thing for sure my love is beyond the mortal and surreal world and our love is too strong for the Sisters of fate themselves will not stop me from having you in these arms of mine whether in this life/death time or in another.

~~~Augustine ~~~

**the names and people mentioned are just made up


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      Lillian K. Staats 5 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

      Really, Really interesting...! lily

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      Freya thank you for the support and all the beautiful comments :D

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      Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      What a sad but beautiful serenade of love. Well done, Sister.

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      Thanks :D

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      Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Morose yet profound and sincere..