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"The Little Tree " (Letter from Marty)

Updated on May 23, 2012

Cruelkindness Subliminally Thoughtless Poetry Challenge

Poem written

by cruelkindness

Title for the poem " the little tree" created

by kj force

"the little tree"


My name is Marty.

I have a story.

Its about a tree.

Not just any tree.

Little tree.

Squirrel's tree.

I lived in this tree.

Someone took my tree.

Before that I had a big tree.

It was taken.

There is no more big trees.

Now, no more little trees.


Can I have my little tree!


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      Janelle 2 years ago

      Great artilce, thank you again for writing.

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      Fiorella 2 years ago

      I appreciate your kind and gerenous advice a lot!. I have been trying it hardly and did not get those amazing results!. It is nice to see that you got my comment in a good way!God bless you!VA:F [1.9.10_1130]please wait VA:F [1.9.10_1130](from 0 votes)

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Adorable, the sweetest thing =) Love the 'wrapped' inside message, well said!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Short, sweet and to the point.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Very cute and funny.

      Vote up and funny, Joyce.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Great job..you must have known I was a environmentalist lover...even though the squirrels invade my bird feeders,the birds have discovered they need to get up pretty early to eat,thus leasson learned..how much smarter the world is in the animal kingdom...

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Aahh..excellent job..you must have read my mind...we assume trees and squirrels will be here forever..man cuts the tree...no seeds from the tree..no food ..hence the squirrel ceases to be...I loved it thank you for the recognition my friend...enjoyed this project immensely !

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      this request was a difficult one. Here is a revision

      cruelkindness (Subliminally Thoughtless)

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      Cathleena Beams 5 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

      Very short and not exactly sweet. Definitely cute. I love the squirrel photo!

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