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the will of the dead

Updated on August 10, 2008
The Will of the dead: 

The path to darkness

carries only torture and madness

soon your conscience dies

and u learn to live with its cries

Your soul backs out

But there is no doubt

that once you give up

you can never press stop

and go to the beginning of time

hoping to save ur soul and mine

for once u surrender to the dark lord

he soon puts ur whole life on hold

you might feel happy at some point

but misery spares no man's heart

honey, you will soon have to pay

whether on earth or on dooms day

Have to face all ur fears

Listen to ur tortured screams

This time, trust me there is no escape

When u realize that it'd be too late

You'll have no second chance

believe me u can beg on my behalf

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      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      is it safe to say that the predominant dark themes of your poetry is the influence of rock music? that if you listen to, say, pop music (yes, you may cringe! LOL) your poetry will be altered?

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      lol...well to be truthful , i only listen to metal :d anything mushy / pop punk whaterver it is gets on my nerves: ) i don't know why but i guess i found my true calling lol ( am kidding here so don't worry)..but i guess i wrote a hopeful poem once ...ill type it and you can judge.. :P

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      Brandilyn 2 years ago

      What lirtbaeing knowledge. Give me liberty or give me death.

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