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The Empty Bucket

Updated on June 6, 2012

Subliminally Thoughtless Poetry Challenge

Poem written

by cruelkindness

Title of Poem "The Empty Bucket" created by

by rosemay50



The Empty Bucket

I carry a desire to live a life full of desires.


Determined, I spend my whole life

until to reach these wants.


I remain unsatisfied-confused knowing I have this desire.


I feel the waste of time rising to the top of my end.


I try to demand satisfaction in this living desire.


Continuous time flows near the rim full of emptiness.


Leaving me with no desire in the choice of moments.


I am longing with lack of time for this fulfillment.


Crazy knowing I have what yearns for such satisfaction.


Here I stay, unsatisfied results to remain desired for satisfaction.

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    • BeyondMax profile image

      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      An interesting one, love the deep thoughts, it is never that simple, isn't it.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      C-o-r-r-e-c-t!!!!!

      "Johnny, tell em what they won"

      Super badly awesome

      Thank you Veronwe for putting some compliments in my cereal.

      Cruelkindness (Subliminally Thoughtless)

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      Well, I always run out of words when it comes to describing your work - always a creative anomaly!

      Great words- how Desire is connected to Life in the system of Time. Desire that just won't fill your life because it cannot be filled itself and always seems empty, aiming for more.

      I applaud thee!

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      HandGun 5 years ago from Here Taking Over

      This is one of my favorites... I really like this poem...

      Handgun

    • dialogue profile image

      dialogue 5 years ago

      I like the above hub, well written. Good work.

    • AudreyHowitt profile image

      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      I love the personification of desire--and love the picture as well!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Everyone wants to fill-up the emptiness they have inside.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      cool picture..like the take on desire representing the empty bucket..

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A very interesting take on 'the Empty Bucket'

      Awesome picture.

      Thank you for the poem and the link

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