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Time In A Bottle (Drifting…)

Updated on July 21, 2016

Drifting Away...

Drifting on a boat to nowhere. Learning but never taken lessons as learned. Will my life find it’s destiny? Find the love thats meant for me and me alone. Tears cried, love lost. My heart breaks from loneliness. Missing my heart, my love, my life.

Drifting to nowhere thinking very hard about the choices I’ve made throughout the years. Damn, I’ve made some stupid mistakes. When will I ever learn? My mother and grandmother asked me. When will I gain the strength to fight what makes me weak and bring me down?

Drifting, drifting, searching for a sign but no clue in sight. Time keeps ticking and I’m bound to find freedom in the nick of time or am I running out of time as I drifted away in this time bottle.


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      HattieMattieMae 6 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Very good, and something we all face!

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      kiona tuner 6 years ago

      Great job, your such an inspiration.

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      Orlando  6 years ago

      I agree brother mad talented. keep up the good work.

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      Tylensky 5 years ago

      Your words are meaning to life young man, grow in true and the rest shall follow...

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      Latoyarice 5 years ago from Miami Fl

      Oh so drifting..

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      Joe Anderson 10 months ago

      Love this song. It's so inspiring and motivational.

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      Ricemedia5 10 months ago

      Love this poetry! Its so inspiring.

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      MightyJoe 10 months ago

      Beautiful and inspirational.

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      Charliemurry 10 months ago

      These words are deep!

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      Monkeyb 10 months ago

      I can relate.

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      Hiphops Best Poet 10 months ago

      This here goes deep. I see many messages told through these lyrics. Life is everything and much is required. Much is giving...

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      LaFinest 10 months ago

      I am imspired!

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      Corey 10 months ago

      Drifting... So deep.

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      Tina Richard 10 months ago

      I can relate to this... Love it's message and ending. So inspiring.

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      LoveBug69 10 months ago

      Life changing...

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      Courage 10 months ago

      Life always seem like time in a bottle. This poem has truly changed my life.

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      Yola Yung 10 months ago

      This poetry maked you want change in your life away from everything and everyone. Just you searching for time in a bottle.

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      JackieKing34 10 months ago

      This poem frees me and takes me on a journey inside life.

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      Tony601 10 months ago

      All time favorite. This poem moves each and everytime i read it :)

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