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Train Station of No Return

Updated on March 5, 2012

No going back

invisible tracks imagine a journey

No map, No way, No path

No clearity

Sitting, waiting, contemplating

heart heavy, hands cold, trembling

dreams surfacing beyond control

fears grabbing, pulling at hair

Waiting, moving, almost still

towards shelter...finding rain

Feeling cold watery wind

eyes stinging

Vision blurred by

pink and yellow dreams

Sleeping a restless wakefulness...

Blind, senseless, vivid, powerful, unbearable

train station


no return.


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    • iva dragostinova profile image

      iva dragostinova 5 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank you!

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      Cathy 5 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

      Iva, this was a fast paced poem that seemed to move faster towards its end, almost similar to the way a train would pull itself away from the depot. Great adjectives, very nice. Thank you.

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      The original Eman 6 years ago from london

      Very nice poem Iva. I enjoyed reading this hub and you defenitly captured alot of raw emotions thoughout this peom. Voted up :)

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      iva dragostinova 6 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank you for reading and you insightful comment zzron.

      Dee42, thank you for your kind words. I'm happy to have been able to create a visual and sensual experience. Thank you again!

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      Dee42 6 years ago

      Ah, this is my kind of hub. Very interesting and awesome. Through your words, you painted a vivid picture, which I just HAD to keep reading. Your a great writer.

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      zzron 6 years ago from Houston, TX.

      Wow this was very riveting. Very visual.