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Watch me suffer

Updated on June 28, 2014

The bitterness of the quiet noise, I hear from you,

My place to breathe quietly in this loud place,

To see you everyday, and you not care what I do,

I feel like I'm living in a closed space,

Can you see me, I look fine do I,

As I look at you, I see past your eyes to your soul,

Whether I am alone or around you I cry, do you care why,

I speak loud when I can, but the suffering is taking its toll and no one knows,

Can I walk with you, to share my pain or regain happiness,

Will you listen to my heart beat, while I listen to yours,

I can not live alone in a world of sadness,

How can you pass so easily through this superficial door,

I always awake with tears on my pillow, so how would you know there are tears, because you look at me as if I was a window, just watching me suffer.


Do you feel for others, or do you choose to look away like they are not there?

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thanks Kratika!

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      Kratika Dubey 3 years ago from Noida

      you pour your emotions so well on paper..!!

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thank you very much Faith reaper and Blondey for reading!

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      Blondey Hubpages 3 years ago

      Wow. God be with you.

      Blessings,

      Blondey

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Powerful and beautifully written. This one is so full of raw emotion.

      Excellent.

      Up ++++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

      Peace

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thanks Cornelia!

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      Korneliya Yonkova 3 years ago from Cork, Ireland

      Beautiful words, voted high. Love the photos too. Keep the great work, buddy :)

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thank you Victoria!

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      Victoria Lynn 3 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      Oh, I have felt the "quiet noise." You write very beautifully!

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thanks to you also pawpawwrites for reading!

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      lyns 3 years ago from USA

      You are welcome kljones86. 828214836p lyns

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      Jim 3 years ago from Kansas

      I like it.

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thanks lyns!

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      lyns 3 years ago from USA

      Love this hub, has some real passion and emotions, voted up/Awesome. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. 77147p lyns

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      yes, and thanks!

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      Jody R. LaGreca 3 years ago from New York, New York

      So sad but I think we all have felt that way at times, nicely done.

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      Along with the wind 3 years ago from colorado

      Thank you very much jan!

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      Janis Leslie Evans 3 years ago from Washington, DC

      Very moving piece, kljones. It reminds me of partners who feel stuck and invisible in the relationship. Your poetic delivery offers a powerful expression of pain that comes from being dismissed. Excellent job, I like it a lot, looking forward to more. Voted up and beautiful.

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