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Where are you ?
Figures you'd be at my favourite spot !
words said ...with regrets..
I Look for you….where could you be ?
I call your phone…..you don’t answer me…
I go to find you where we first met….
It was raining that night and I got wet…
I’m feeling so lonely and need a hug….
Where have you gone ?
I can’t find you anywhere…
It was then, I realized we had a terrible fight …..
And you have been gone for over a night……
Words were said and I do regret.....
Words I wish I would not have said....
They were the kind that cut to the quick…
My heart is broken and I feel so sick…
Words of forgiveness, run through my head…
Forgive me my love, for all that I said…
Hopefully soon, you will return to me…..
Because, I can’t go on living… without thee…
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thelyricwriter.....agree...the world it seems is a faster than ever changing place these days, prone to" changing without notice" and sometimes you don't notice because it changed in the middle of the change !!!!
Hey, maybe I'll use that for my next hub.....enjoy your week.
No problem KJ. I know, I don't like many of the new changes. Poetry should be featured and have the same access to search engines for people that seek them. The more views for Hubpages, the better. I know that's how they make their money as we all do. I wish we had more of a voice for changes then one forum.
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thelyricwriter.....I have rec'd no notifications for months of the hubbers I follow and it appears none of my hubs are featured anymore , according to my stats/homepage. I am trying to get back , so much has changed on HP....thank you for asking, appreciated.
I didn't realize that its been 16 months since I read this KJ!! WOW!! Where does the time go? Speaking of "where are you" :) Hope all is well KJ. I've been writing daily again and I hadn't see you in a while. Sure do miss your writing, hint hint... Wishing you all the best dear friend
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dghbrh..thank you again for comment and following....have a great week...
kj force....its awesome.....u r spontaneous and the poem is full of emotion....could really relate to it.:-)
Beautiful..and beautiful poem KJF! Voted up!
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thelyricwriter..appreciate your comments, glad my words triggered a thought..sometimes life appears so complex yet can be so simple. Glad you liked it...
Beautiful poem KJ. It is just like the old saying, "don't know what you got until it is gone". It holds true in so many different ways in life. This reminds me of my wife, just how I would feel if she would ever be out of my life. Beautiful:)
Lovely poem. At last happy ending.
Dawnrichard
when i read your poem it transport me back to some memories like these. finding him gone, asking where is he when i needed a hug..then would say sorry because you can't stand that you're fighting.. life it is.
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thank you for your comments..first attempt at a poem.hubbers like you is what inspire me..trying other ways to put the thoughts/words out there....
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snowdrops,,thank you for your kind comments..and the fact you can relate means you are living life vs. existing..this was the first poem I have ever done..fellow hubbers like yourself were my inspiration..
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snowdrops...Lot Rillera..Thank you for your kind comments..glad you could relate..it means you live vs. exist..This was the first poem I have ever written..and you my fellow hubbers were my inspiration..appreciate your words...
nice poem Kj force. voted up!
Awesome.. I can totally relate.. sometimes when i feel lonely and needed a hug, especially after a fight.
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