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who cares who's watching?

Updated on March 6, 2010

out of sight

Not sure when this was written? September 2002? I was 17 when I wrote this one. I know I was young but I really cared for this guy and, at the time, I truly felt love and passion towards him a great deal. We had went to the beach that day and I remember we were making out, hugging, kissing, in the surf. I was so worried about what everyone was thinking, I kept telling him to stop because people were watching. His reply, "who cares who's watching?"

strolling down the beach with fire in my eyes

hoping one day you'll realize beneath my beauty what underlies

i glance across at the open sea

then look back to see your baby blues gazing at me

slowly we walk towards each other

we're staring very hard at one another

your lips caress mine with the deepest emotion

stirs the butterflies with such commotion

we fall in the sand

bodies trembling with passion

so into each other

not hearing the waves crashing

hours seem like minutes as day turned to night

as we felt untouchable and out of sight


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      gwennies pen 8 years ago

      I liked this poem. Very touching and real. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)