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Winter Spring - A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
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For Eve With Love

I found this letter this morning inside my inbox.

“I really love your poem makes me inspired everytime I read them. Now I am very sad because my boy friend left me because of his jealous which I dont know understand why. Do you have any poem? I want to share it with him. Thank you so much im waiting your reply . Take care and Allah be with you always.


Eve”

Dear Eve,

Thank you for liking my poem. It is amazing feeling to know that my poems can do more than just giving happy feeling for me who wrote it, but inspiring others too. That’s put smile in my face. Thank you.

Actually I don’t have time to write a poem today, but I know love and pain feels like. I just lost the one so dear in heart recently. That’s something unbearable, mostly if we have to through it alone and that’s why I decided to put down my dictates and write you a song about it. But to be honest I’m not really sure what kind of poem you hope to read. For today I will try to expressing your emotion only. Hopefully few days later after my assignment are done, I can write you something to share with the one you love or maybe to cheer you up.

This is for now, hope you like it.

Big hug for you and hope God will ease your pain

Freya

Kiss The Rain By Yiruma

Winter Spring

Can you hear me calling?

I woke up today with saddened heart

My love,

Why are you not here with me?

Outside the world turned into white

Is it winter?

But how can it be?

Isn’t it just yesterday when the spring was here?

Flowers was blooming,

Birds was chirping,

Fresh scent of the air was filled my lung

There inside your arm I was thought;

I found my magic wand

I breathed your name when you kissed my tears

We laughed and celebrated this wonderful feeling

Happiness never was so simple,

Yet so complete

When my love;

You became the world to me

But the door had suddenly shut

And now you are gone

Chosed to say goodbye and leave me all alone

Swept all dreams away

For a thing I never understand why

In this sorrow

I still holding on

To the only hope which left unbroken

Someday you will turn your back again

And see...

How this love never less

Nor gave you any lies

My love,

Can you hear me calling now?

I fell asleep today with the tears on my face

Hoping spring will come again tomorrow

But why are you

Still not here with me?

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    Demas W Jasper 7 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

    I like the contrast of spring and winter, love and sadness unanswered. There is certainly beauty in spring, but there can be beauty in winter, also. Learning to know love is essential to recognizing it when it comes again. Dealing with sadness is something we each must learn to do, for there are regrets, disappointments, and losses in all our lives. Tests and trials bring us understanding and wisdom we can learn and benefit from, even in our moments of sadness and loss. Nicely done. Review and edit until you are fully satisfied with this poem which has such a strong beginning.

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    Freya Cesare 7 months ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Shruti. ^^

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    Freya Cesare 7 months ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Oh, my dear poetic father; ahorseback, I miss you.

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    Freya Cesare 7 months ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I'm glad you found this poem, Eve.

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    shruti sheshadri 5 years ago from Bangalore, India

    its a beautiful ending, i really loved reading all your poems, soulful and deep... Thank you :)

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    ahorseback 5 years ago

    That would be just like my little Freya to help someone else through the jungles of love and loss .....She's a special one that girl !....Ed

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    Evelinda 5 years ago

    Thank you so much Freya san for the wonderful poem ,thank's for sharing...Eve

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Perspycacious & Stars439: Thank you very much. ^^

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    stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

    Beautiful poem dear heart. GBY.

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    Demas W Jasper 6 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

    Apa kabar, mim? Have a wonderful day. You expressed many wonderful thoughts very well.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Lol. Huggy bear? Isn't it nice? Thank you, dad. You are always an inspiration for me.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, happy thought. Thank you. That's really kind of you. I visited your hubs today and love it. Have a nice day there.

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    ahorseback 6 years ago

    Freya , My beautiful hub daughter ! Awesome poem. I think that love and living on go hand in hand , perhaps we all have had a love that was never realized, and doesn't it make us better souls ! Your beauty helps yor friends !.......That makes you a Huggy bear!...Be well my child!.......:-}

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    My happy Thoughts 6 years ago from United Arab Emirates - Dubai

    hi freya .. u inspire me a lot. God bless

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you for reading and commenting, my friends.

    Poem Hunter: I am glad able to give your good time in your day

    Sligobay: indeed, it will pass. But still the pain really unbearable sometimes.

    Genna East: "Spring always finds a way…as does life and love." Indeed. Hopefully Eve can feel the same.

    Deborah Brooks: Aww, that is so kind of you. I'll try my best. ^_^ Thank you.

    Lady Guineviere: Hello, dear. Thank you for reading.

    Writer20: I really hope I am. ^_^

    Movie Master: thank you, Lesley. Than comment really sweet.

    Thank you everyone.

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    Movie Master 6 years ago from United Kingdom

    Your writing is so beautiful Freya.

    Thank you for sharing this and voted up.

    Best wishes Lesley

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    Joyce Haragsim 6 years ago from Southern Nevada

    I'm sure you have cheered your friend up. Voted up and awesome for your beautiful poem, Joyce

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    Debra Allen 6 years ago from West By God

    Wow, so touching. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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    Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    Your friend is right you write simply beautiful.. flows so wonderful.. you can touch hearts oh so delicate. voted up

    debbie

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    Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

    There is a delicacy, a grace to this poem I like very much. The music melds beautifully. Spring always finds a way…as does life and love.

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    sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

    The pain of loss with unrequited love is exquisite and your words have captured the experience. This too shall pass.

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    poemhunter 6 years ago from Los Angeles

    Excellent poem. The flow of words is superb. It just touched my heart. I loved all the pictures too. You made my day.

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