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I'll Remember us- Teenage Girl Poetry

Updated on August 16, 2012

Teenage Break-up Poem- I''ll Remember Us

This is a poem I wrote a loooonnnggg long time ago. Okay it wasn't that long ago, I'm still a young-in. Definetely about 6 or 7 years ago...somewhere around there. I found it in one of my old little writing books I came across today. It was EuroNinila in her teenager days, making up poems when she didn't even have a real boyfriend yet! Haha, here it goes....


I''ll Remember Us


When it was just you and me

Oh Baby, complete ecstasy

Never thought it'd end so quickly

And now I'm feeling pretty sickly


Oh baby you caught me by surprise

Right away fell in love with those eyes

I don't know why it ended

By another, my heart can't be mended

But at least I had a lovely time with you

Even if I wasn't meant for you


When it was just you and me

You made me feel so...free

Never thought it'd end so quickly

But it's just the way it's gotta be


Baby you broke my heart

But I'd do it again from the start

That's how much I want you

I would've done everything for you

But now that were not together

I'll remember us, 'till forever

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thank you Deborah! ::hugs back:: :)!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      love this poem.. wow we all have been there and yes we would do it all over again.. hugs from Tennessee

      Debbie

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      You are so right, this is why I love hubpages, you are too kind! Have an awesome day!

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      JT Walters 5 years ago from Florida

      We are all here to help each other and I do believe one good read deserves another.

      Have a great day!!

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thank you for the visit JT Walters!

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      JT Walters 5 years ago from Florida

      Hi EuroNinila,

      I picked this because I am an aspiring poet. Well done and beautiful.

      All My Best,

      JT

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      yes shiningirisheyes, definitely made me feel all like butterflies in my stomach reading my old stuff, thanks for reading :)!

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      thanks always exploring!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Isn't it like walking back in time when you come across these little mementos. Thanks for sharing!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Aha sweet love, the best kind before the heart breaks..Loved it...

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thank you very much Integrity Yes, you always leave me encouraging comments and I really appreciate it! :)

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      I definitely voted up. You rock very hard. Keep excelling rapidly!

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      @ Gypsy, Memories are good, most of the time and if not...well you live and you learn. Thanks for swingin' by my hubs!

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      MsDora, who knows what I was thinking then...thanks for your comment!

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks for the votes kashmir56!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just lovely. Nothing like teen romance. Sometimes it feels like the heartache will go on forever but it never does. Nice to have the memories though.

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      Dora Weithers 5 years ago from The Caribbean

      I find it interesting that you are imagining heartbreak before it happened. Hope those thought don't affect you later. Good expressions, though. Thanks f or sharing.

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      This is such a beautifully written poem that is written from the heart !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks NateB11, yes it is interesting to look back at what you wrote in the past. It probably it what I would have wanted to happen at the time, so obviously I was a weirdo then. Haha! But yea, I got excited when I saw them yesterday, I have more so I might put more up. Maybe another teenager will relate, you never know! Thanks for your comment and for reading my little teen poem, lol.

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      Nathan Bernardo 5 years ago from California, United States of America

      I find it interesting to look at something I wrote many years ago, it is a glimpse back into what I was thinking and feeling at the time; it's kind of fun. As you say, you were thinking a certain way at the time, and that's what makes it interesting. This poem is a good expression of that, maybe of what you wanted to have happen at the time; which means the poem expresses that feeling of what you want to happen. I think it has good rhythm too.

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      thank you tobusiness, I think I just wanted to have a love then. Thank you for your sweet comment and for reading :)

      Thanks Clayton!!

      Thanks for the vote up girishpuri!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      This is so sweet, I think you must have had a secret love, to be able to express such feelings, if not, what a very talented young lady you were even then. Up and beautiful.

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      Clayton 5 years ago from Dubai, United Arab Emirates

      rather epic i say! voted up yon lass, words admired truly!

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Touching, voted up

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      Fotinoula Gypsyy 5 years ago from NYC BABY

      Thanks Nick for reading ! I don't know if it was from the heart or not when I wrote it because my younger self apparently dell in love with eyes, lol.

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      Nick Hanlon 5 years ago from Chiang Mai

      Well if it's from the heart then that's all that matters.