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your leaving

Updated on April 30, 2011

 your leaving...so go

dont stay just for me

your going..just go

we had no promises

we had just this

and even though

you probably don't know

its meant a lot to me

that i was someone

you chose

to invite in

but your going

i can see

its what your trying to say

my heart will miss you

and wonder why

it always ends this way

a dear friend

a kindred heart

they never hang around

i hope your life is filled with midnights

ill miss you.

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      Lisa Stover 6 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

      First thing I have read by you and I am on my way to read the rest :)

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      not for some epigramman...not for some. some drive off and dont even look in the rearview mirror.

      tom- lol

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      pINK,NO NOTHING STINKS

      Iwas just jokin...ha...er haha

      TH

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...hard to leave someone who writes as beautifully as this ......

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      something smell tom?

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      PU,

      EYE know- ha *snicker*

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      omg, you know im not joking about your ol eye, lol.

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Pink,

      yea I know I only GOT one eye... that hurts *sob* your so mean... i thought you *sob* were my freind and then you make an eye joke....***sticks tongue out folds arms and turns back***-

      You're-Totally mean..

      *snicker* *ha*

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, you got me tom. good eye.

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      pink,

      i gotta say-i liked it- am i having a stroke moment or a stroke of genius moment when i say you chose the Raven picture in secret or ( not so secret) omage to Edger allen poes "The Raven"... So quoth the Raven - Nevermore...and that is what is happening through your poem- you are saying nevermore to your past ... or i could be wrong ...

      TH

      So quoth the raven

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      that i shall say goodnight till it be morrow. i luv ya to pieces fossillady

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Parting is such sweet sorrow!

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      hmmmmmmmmmmmm

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      I am sure they will miss you too. Maybe life is full of more surprises than you can see just yet. Maybe you should unwrap the gift before throwing it away, you may see more than you knew what you thought was true.

      up and beautiful Ms. Brella..

      JLOVE