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The Beautiful Lady In The Rain. My Second Romance Short Story .

Updated on September 26, 2012

Monday, May 2, 2011

It was late in the evening. I was so tired from a double shift. Cars had to be ready to ship out. I'm just a man, just another blue collar fellow that gets dirty, and greasy hands installing engine parts, and I am a welder.

I make fair money. I was blessed, and purchased some nice steaks on sale from a supermarket near by. I was so tired I just stacked them in the freezer, then kicked off my work boots , and practically fell in my bed without taking a shower.

In deep sleep I kept hearing the doorbell ringing, and with all the strength I could muster , I forced myself out of bed ,and then I stumbled on over to the door, and opened it.

It was pretty late, and I don't know why I ever even bothered to see who it was, but something told me in my mind that I needed to see who it was .

And then there was this young woman just standing outside my door. She had long brown wet hair, and the rain was practically drenching her. She looked all used up , and tired like she was from the streets.

She told me that she needed help. In fact she was shaking like a leaf. I had my suspicions that she might have been a drug addict. I really did not want to get involved with someone who might be into that kind of stuff, but I could not just leave her out in the rain so I invited her into my house that was in dire need of getting cleaned up.

It was getting really late so I had to get some rest, and so I told the young woman to make herself comfortable in my home, and to dry herself up in the bathroom, and to eat whatever she wanted from my refrigerator. I told her that I was dead tired, so I had to get some sleep, or I would not be able to go to work.

Six o'clock came around too early, and too fast. I was extremely exhausted, and I was really worried that I might not be fit to put out a decent day's work from my tired body , but I pulled myself out of bed by grabbing hold of a steel hook that I used to hang my boots on.

Drooping around my house I headed for my bathroom. I was so tired that I actually forgot about the lady. When I did think about her for a moment I kind of hoped she would not steal anything, even though I did not have much that was worth taking , or selling for dope. I just took my chances with her, but then she met me in my hall on my way to the bathroom. She said that I looked awfully tired , and that she would call my boss for me, and simply say that I was not well for the day.

I was so tired that I gave her the phone number to the plant. She called the place for me, and gave them a very good excuse for me to get a few days off. I told her she might get me fired. She told me that my boss wanted me to get some good rest, and to only come back to work if I got enough rest .

She was very nice, and thoughtful, so I went back to sleep, and when I woke up it was late in the afternoon.

What in the world am I doing I thought. I don't know her, and she is taking care of me when I really should be taking care of her.

When I finally got out of bed that day,I walked into my living room , and saw the young woman sleeping on my sofa. Wow,she was beautiful , and looked so much cleaner, and was wearing one of my long flannel shirts .

When I walked into my kitchen I saw biscuits on the table, and coffee in my coffee maker. The coffee and biscuits smelled so wonderful.

And then in a sudden surprise she was in the kitchen right there with me. Wow, she sure was a light sleeper.

She sure did smell good too. And I was shocked to near death when she told me that clean clothes were folded in my bathroom, and that my bath water was in my bath tub. I thought to myself, golly, I never had household help like this, and I will keep my mouth shut about it, and anyway she did not look like a problem so why not just simply enjoy it all, and trust this woman.

Actually the young lady was quite lovely with beautiful clean hair, and she was very cute wearing my large flannel shirt that was way too big for her.

She told me that she was very sorry that all she had to wear was my boxer shorts which looked a little silly on her. I heard my washing machine going threw cycles, and the dryer running, so I suspected her clothes were getting washed , and dried along with mine as well .

Wouldn't you know,later on she even cooked up a few of my steaks , and all I needed to do was to warm them up for a minute in the microwave .

My goodness did I have it made. This girl was really fantastic. After eating I went to my bathroom to take a bath. I was still really tired so I slid in my bath tub, and really soaked for a long time, and then I heard her knocking on my bathroom door.

I said, " Come on in if your that brave." I had enough soap bubbles anyhow in my tub to cover me up good like a television movie star, but the only problem was that I had my nasty gross looking fingernails from all of my rough work, handling pipes, and for being a pipe fitter. I did have a few good things going on for me though, I have a great firm masculine muscular body, and beautiful women simply relish the joy of touching my firm flesh.

Well in she came, and then she stooped down beside me , and took one of my hands , and kissed me on my lips, and slowly and meticulously took a soft cloth, and washed the hard grease from under my fingernails. This was ultimately something only my mother might do.

Needless to say , I was lost and overwhelmed over her beauty , and kindness so I pulled her toward me, and could not help but kiss her passionately .

Well the rest is all too easy to figure out. It was not long before she was in my bath tub with me, and she was so beautiful, and so pretty, and so fresh, an glowing, and loving.

The girl that I had thought was in a bad way was not involved with drugs.

I went back to work a few days later, and then the lovely magnificent young woman left for a while , but then she returned to see me again.

When I heard my door bell ring again one late evening, there she was once more, but this time she happened to be wearing very nice clothes,and had a beautiful red convertible parked in the front of my yard that belonged to her.

And what I found out was that she was very rich, and in fact her father was a billionaire tycoon, and somehow she had escaped from being kidnapped. I never asked her what happened. After all I just took in a woman that was down ,and out , and needed some help.

How would I know that three kidnappers were arrested by the FBI, and that she had come to me for protection from criminals.

Well maybe she should have told me about the situation , but she did not. Now I no longer have to be a pipe fitter, and I can sleep late like a real movie star, but with this beautiful girl in my arms.

And she has the sweetest kisses, and they were just like tasting a fantastic wine. And in our wonderful marriage bed, in her lovely penthouse apartment is where we are both very happy. She has such soft sensuous lips, and her beautiful body is indescribably fantastic. And when we are in love, it is like being in a kind of Heaven.

The End.


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    • stars439 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Dear marcoujor : Thank you very much dear heart, and God Bless You.

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      Maria Jordan 

      7 years ago from Jeffersonville PA


      This is the second/ successful time you have written outside your comfort zone. You are creative and elegant in your expression and I challenge you to keep going!


    • stars439 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Dear Phoenix : Thank you for visiting, and glad you liked the story precious heart. God Bless You.

    • stars439 profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      Dear Eiddwen: It is a a bit of a challenge to write these little rascals, and I really appreciate the encouragement you give me. Writers need encouragement like monkeys need bananas. Ha Ha. Corny me.

      Your sweet, and adorable all the way to Andromeda and back. Love you like I love fried chicken on a checkered table cloth. God Bless You Precious heart.

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      7 years ago from On the edge

      I agree with Eiddwen. This is really good and you have found a real channel of talent. Please write more of these!

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      7 years ago from Wales

      A brilliant story stars, i think you should write a few more of these. I loved the twist as well, so I push all the buttons for this one.

      Take care



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