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Sonnets of Darkness:Silent Tears

Updated on October 1, 2008

No one needs a photographic memory when it comes to all the pain others inflict on us.


When it comes to pain , everyone of us has had his own share of it. Yet, many of us deal with it in differet ways.To me, i've kept my silent tears to myself for a while.I wanted to write something that teenagers or other young adults might relate to.Yet, the only thing that seemed to pop up on my mind was painful memories about life childhood and other stuff.You know you can't stop your pen from writing when it is determined to remind you of lots of things you were trying to forget by writing. If i learned something from that , it is that writing all about can help in some cases overcome the hard times.Our pens as writers here are mighty weapons with which some people can relate to or even give some pieces of advice when it comes to dealing with life issues.Enjoy the silence and don't stop writing no matter what!

Silent Tears:

Faking bloody Smiles

Surrounded by raging fires.

With no will to live, i kept my silent tears,

my own.Not even sharp blades,

can cut through the tormenting silence.

Time is my only killer.

Yet, loneliness in murder.

Pushing me once again into the edje. Falling

Into the infinite dark black hole of agony and suffering.

I can no longer silence my tears

No longer burry my fears.

My heart is aching

and the pain is painstaking.

The pain eats me up. Reminding

Me none stop of all the tormenting

Memories of others watching me burning.

I cried a thousand times , begged

The gods for mercy. Like the dead

I surrender to the dark.

Falling into the black

hole of suicide.My cries were in Vain

Whenever they savored my pain.

I can cry harder than the furies.

Now that my life is over all that remains is memories


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      Grizzly 2 years ago

      I thugoht finding this would be so arduous but it's a breeze!

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      Uriel 9 years ago from Lebanon

      the thing is i am into writing and it so happens that all what i write rotates around dark things, its nothing serious.Yet, i do appriciate the advice thank you very much ...

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      Uriel 9 years ago from Lebanon

      thanks for ur touching words:D

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      jjrubio 9 years ago

      This is deep. Coming from one poet to another, yes our pens are mighty weapons that can be of good or bad. And we cannot help what our heart needs to write at the time because writing is a therapeutic outlet. Your poem is very dark and somewhat meloncholy. I hope you feel better letting it out. Try to focus on the positive. The sorrow and pain although hurt you dreadfully it seems that it has made you stronger. "That which does not kill you makes you stronger". And it is true. No one is the same on experiences but everyone goes through their tribulations. Some more than others. Don't let whatever happened to you or whoever hurt you make who you are today. Be a survivor,Take care. =)