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moments of emptiness

Updated on August 10, 2008

have u ever experienced a moment of emptiness in which ur pen stops writing?


when man cant spill out wts on his mind he can try to write hoping his pen too wont let him down. sometimes expressing urself is too damn hard..and that's when your pen betrays you. The poem i am about to share expresses some random thoughts that i didnt know how to explain.

Yet the best of all writing i do believe is when you arent forced to write because you are expected to, in fact all the clearest of all pure emotions come at times when u cant explain. i once had this feeling of writing a poem in the bathroom can u believe it? other times when feeling mad or depressed ...ciao

those moments of nothingness

and the feeling of emptiness

building up one another

with time get even harder

some say "time to get a life"

wtf! How about a knife

driven into this piece of ice

i call my heart.Pain rolls on like a dice

killing every living soul in my body

driving me insane.Will Somebody

just put me to eternal

rest or burial

time passes by as slow as it gets

living permanent scars on my wrists

doubts keep piling up

backed up,

with emotional bursts none stop

i wonder how long would it take

before i permenantly break

burry me six feet under

for i forever surrender

may the dark lord have mercy on my soul

for i forever surrender to this black hole

of emptiness

of nothingness

10:10 pm


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    • Uriel profile image

      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      too much dark metal music Nikki :D

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      Nikki Wicked 7 years ago from Louisiana

      aww cheer up emo kid. lol jk. i can relate

    • Uriel profile image

      Uriel 9 years ago from Lebanon

      thanks for your comment :P its been a pleasure

    • threeg5 profile image

      threeg5 9 years ago

      That was very well put together. I like it and that style of writing is a very personal style of writing to me. Thank You very much for posting this.