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A Deceptive Man

Updated on June 23, 2015

Rotten to the Core

I've never disliked someone so much that the taste of death would be sweet to my tongue!

I curse the day I met you, for that very day I should've died.

You were the hell I feared and the demon in my nightmares.

The pain and torment I had to live with everyday were like small daggers pinching the depths of my soul....

You vomit worthless words and poison the air.

For everything you touch, you destroy.

You walk around like a wolf in sheep's clothing, devouring the innocents of pure souls and torturing your victims with empty promises.


Written By: Elizabeth Rivera


(I have first hand experiencing being with a man that has a black hole such as this)

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Powerful stuff. I am sure many can relate to this dark but impressive poem.

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      Elizabeth Rivera 2 years ago from Bronx NY

      Thank you, those are almost all passed away... Time heals all things..

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      Mihnea-Andrei Andreescu 2 years ago from Tilburg

      I am sorry to hear that.Don't lose hope and practise poetry-It will give your feelings a harmonious shape and sound.I'm sure that the man who did this to you was not worth it.Be strong!

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      Elizabeth Rivera 2 years ago from Bronx NY

      Thanks for the advise. I really never thought about that... I'm going to give that a try. Yes, my poetry are based on all emotional events that occurred in my life.

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      Mihnea-Andrei Andreescu 2 years ago from Tilburg

      Your work is very passionate and nevrotic-you should really get into symbolist poetry.Give your feelings a lyrical nuance and they will sound much better!Anyway your work is not bad at all and you have great potential.I assume all these negative feelings you portray in your work are not just fictional and have a real basis am I right?

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      Elizabeth Rivera 3 years ago from Bronx NY

      Thank you. Most of my work are my own experiences, but I do have some that others have inspired me to write by listening to their stresses of life.

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      Colin Garrow 3 years ago from Kinneff, Scotland

      Wow - strong stuff! Interesting use od language, Elizabeth.

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