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A Promise of a New Tomorrow

Updated on July 6, 2013


"Beginnings are usually scary and endings are usually sad, but it's everything in between that makes it all worth living."

Every story has an end, but in life every ending is just a new beginning.

The sun slowly kissed the sea
And the sky turns purplish gray
The nightingales sung their farewell melody
While the cold wind swept your voice away
As you say goodbye to me.


The night seems endless
The moon above smiles wearily
Floating silently on a pale dark sky
Someday, you’ll know
That it’s wrong to let me go.


As the morning sun peeped into my life
And shed its ray of love
Bright hues were painted on my lips
Full of deceitful lies
You came back.


I cannot say
That a dried and withered flower
Can bloom again in the heat of a scorching sun
I don’t know...
And I still don’t want to know.


Every story has an end, but in life every ending is just a new beginning.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      This is a beautiful poem written from the flower's perspecitve. I don't know if it can ever bloom again either, but your last line is epic. Excellent poem.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown beautifully done, very sad, but the rains will return and the dry seed will germinate and love will once again blossom. Voting up and beautiful.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Tammy, Jo, thank you for the comment..

      when the time comes that the rain will make the flower blossom again, it will be a new one promising a new dawn.

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      I like your poem :0 as always.

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. With every poem you write and i read i see the beauty and sweetness in you within them . And with each one i read i get to see a little bit more of you each time, and each time i am so impressed !

      Well done and vote up and more !!!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You are so intelligent about the ways of life. I honestly think this is your best work....bravo my friend!

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      kumar24894 5 years ago from Fuck of HUBPAGES

      Just loved your last line..

      Thats right, every ending is the beginning for new things to happen .

      Awesome poem , Sharing !

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      harliquinn 5 years ago

      Beautiful. The second to last stanza was my favorite, I loved the imagery you used and the way it seemed good but went dark.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Your quotes at the beginning and end are lovely and full of wisdom. Your writing just keeps getting more beautiful and inspiring. I really enjoyed this piece M. Voted up, shared, beautiful, awesome, and interesting :)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      This was truly amazing and magnificent! I enjoyed your imagery, very beautiful! Job well done for sure here M!

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      Midlife Magic 5 years ago from Canada

      Those were valuable well timed words for me....

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      Debby Bruck 5 years ago

      Spy ~ Thumbs up beautiful for this "cycle of life" poem in living color. Blessings, Debby

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Glorious words in your poem which has been a pleasure to read.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So well said...

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful, Spy! I know I sound like a broken record, but your growth blossoming before my eyes pleases me so. You are a very special person. I see your strength building and the belief in yourself. This poem is testament to that!

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      oceansider 5 years ago

      Loved this poem M!......Well done, very beautiful and sweet. Hope you're doing well too! God's blessings to you, Helen

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      That's what is so beautiful, a promise of a new tomorrow, your words conveyed that message very well

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      snowdrops, kashmir, billy, kumar, rachel, james, j, midlife magic, debbie, joyce, deb, bravewarrior, helen, ruby...

      thank you all very much for reading..as well as your wonderful messages. i really appreciate it.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      the sun is slowly setting on this sea

      but during its day I shined brighter than he

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Unknown spy...I loved the poem..however..I'm sorry but I feel once there is question/doubt regarding a relationship..doom is right around the corner...call me unromantic, but, I feel there are many other factors in relationships...trust/respect/kindness/honesty/unconditional thoughtfulness...etc.......thanks for sharing your thoughts/words...

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Whew..thank you Mhatter!!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you for the message KJF, appreciate it much.

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      Harshita 5 years ago from Karnataka, India

      Well written with equally well assembled words :)

      Beautiful :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you much iharshita :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Original perspective and absolutely beautiful.

      Another masterpiece.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Beckie, your message is perfect :) Thank you!

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      I am so in love with this verse of your poem. I have to keep reading it over and over.

      "The night seems endless

      The moon above smiles wearily

      Floating silently on a pale dark sky

      Someday, you’ll know

      That it’s wrong to let me go"

      You're a great writer always expressing a unique point of view. Voted up

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Ryem, thank you for appreciating.. you too, one great writer here in HP. Take care!

      xoxo.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Unknown Spy

      "I cannot say

      That a dried and withered flower

      Can bloom again in the heat of a scorching sun

      I don’t know...

      And I still don’t want to know"

      Can a relationship bloom again when we have burned by lies and deceit?

      Love this one.

      Voted up and away!

      Have a good day :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, sue.amazing message! :)

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      How I love to read your poetry - this has to be one of your best!

      Voting up/awesome

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Lesley...ohhh thank you thank you sooo much!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Introduction note and end note both are very true. I loved your poem.

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      Such a beautiful emotion telling a story untold still showing immense strength to rise and fight against all odds.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Vinaya!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Qudsiap1. :) I appreciate your wonderful comment.

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      micblue 5 years ago

      i like your poems. very well done

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Micblue :) so kind of you.

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      Murphy 5 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      *smiles*

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      awesome and a very moving.

      i loved reading it very much. voted up....sharing:-)

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      shalini sharan 5 years ago from Delhi

      i seriously loved the last line, it is so optimistic unknown, it is an amazing work, voted up

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Very moving..... Beautiful! Sad ending with a great message..... Love it!

      Voting up and awesome!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Critical Message

      Dghbrh

      Shalini

      Lathing,

      thank you guys for your messages!

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      Ashish Joshi 5 years ago from India

      Beautifully expressed, spy...this one is seriously 'up' there in a different league.

      Great work...keep it up.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you ash! you're the best!

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      Ashish Joshi 5 years ago from India

      And you know, the 'sayings' you use in your poems really add to them. This is one of the best poems from you I've read.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Yeah, it really adds to the message. Thank you so much Ash for appreciating :)

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      Mandar Karandikar 5 years ago from Ratlam, India

      Hey M,

      It was a wonderful poem. Beautiful presentation through powerful words. Very well done. Have a great day,

      :) Mandar

      (Every story has an end, but in life every ending is just a new beginning- an amazing quote!)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Mandar..thank you pal!

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      A.E. Williams 5 years ago from Hampton, GA

      You're awesome unknown!! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      You too aubrey! very talented writer.

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Like you said "

      Every story has an end, but in life every ending is just a new beginning" believe in it and yourself.

      Needless to say You are a FANTASTIC writer!

      Keep up the good work :)

      Take care.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks Cracknutcase! You are a fantastic writer too!

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      Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      "Someday, you’ll know

      That it’s wrong to let me go"

      Loved that, lived it, left with very fond memories. Well done, Spy! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi TT, thanks a lot, you're sweet :)

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      Ishwaryaa Dhandapani 4 years ago from Chennai, India

      You versed this poem beautifully that it actually stirred feelings & imagination in many of us - readers/hubbers! I admired the first and last sayings in your poem. Well-done!

      Thanks for SHARING. Beautiful. Voted up

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Ish! thanks for the votes and for the wonderful message you posted.

      xoxo

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      Tiffany Gabel 4 years ago from Olathe KS (Kansas City Metro Area)

      This is nicely written! Thanks for sharing :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thanks Tiff! that's wonderful of you to visit.

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