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An Aries and Libra

Updated on February 9, 2014

Shadows displayed,

as soft music played,

her blue eyes

were riveted to his,

as their bodies swayed,

he wasn’t immune

to what those eyes conveyed,

there was no harm,

just her beauty and charm,

and her gaze spoke volumes,

those volumes begged for romance,

as they continued the slow dance,

feelings would fold,

and love took hold,

one might call it a test,

her head cradled softly

on his chest,

then the lips invaded,

as the sheen of her lipstick faded,

one love, full moon, low light,

as their romance

filled the night.

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© 2012 Frank Atanacio

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      Senoritaa 4 years ago

      Aries and Libra! Really?? I am Aries :)

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Truly! You are a romantic!!

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      Susan Zutautas 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Oh I like this. I'm a Libra and once had a very long relationship with an Aries ... Your title really caught my attention :)

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      LOL @ Senoritaa.. yeah Libra and Aries... Audrey.. who me? Couldn't be.. LOL thanks for stopping by.. I'm glad you stopped by Justasksusan and leaving a comment bless you :)

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      Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

      Beautiful romantic poem, frank.

      you are a pro in romance and suspense writing. Should try to combine the two elements and make a good novel, frank :)

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      Gypsy48 4 years ago

      Surprising change of pace Frank :) Very romantic poem. Nicely done!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Thanks so much Ruch.. trying to find another niche.. my crime poems are getting too many of thoses (S)'s with a line through them saying they are in violation because of the graphic nature.. so Im trying to lighten things up : Frank

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Im trying gypsy48 I envy those hubbers who can push these out without a hitch and still put out a perfect product..LOL bless you

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Up, awesome, and beautiful Frank! Talk about stepping outside the box:) Wow, your more talented then what I thought, and that was already a lot Frank! LOL I enjoyed this. Nothing wrong with trying new things.

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Frank.....not a dead body in sight!...if this was a first attempt then I have to say it was very impressive..is this just the start of something new!?....

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Well, We have our second Mr. surprise Romantic with us today writing exciting romantic poems.

      Voted up and totally beautiful, Ms. Pieces.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      LOL @ Joyce thank you so much pieces..:) and thelyricwriter yeah I know.. I still need the pratice though.. and Valleypoet.. I fought the urge to keep from writing a case-file out of this LOL thank you guys so much :) Frank

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      You are so romantic, I love it.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      ahh but you're still the best :) right?

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Well you had me fooled, I was waiting to see who murdered who Lol. So I read it again without the expectation and thoroughly enjoyed this romantic side of you :)

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Wow, That was Awesome!!!! In doesn't matter what genre you write, I love reading it!!!! You amaze me!!!!

      Voted Up, Awesome, Beautiful, and Shared!!!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      I was also waiting to see who was going to be murdered Rosemay LOL thanks for stopping by.. and Patty sweet Patty God blessed you :)

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      Cathleena Beams 4 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

      Your title captured my attention. Definitely worth reading this romantic poem. I am also an Aries. Voting up, awesome, beautiful, interesting and sharing!

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Frank,

      This Aries loves your poem.

      Voted up and away!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Thank you so much Cat and Sue for stopping by this page :) bless you both :) Frank

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      No HORROR on your Scope... must be a SIGN of love.

      Yeah, romance isn't dead. Voted UP & Awesome.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Yeah Marcoujor like I said to Ruch I'm trying to find another niche.. my crime poems are getting too many of thoses (S)'s with a line through them saying they are in violation because of the graphic nature.. so Im trying to lighten things up

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      Phoebe Pike 4 years ago

      Beautifully written as always.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Thank you Phoebe.. just wondering why you newest hubs aren't showing up on my feed? Hmm

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      Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

      You've got it in this genre too ol' man, nice! Let me guess that your a Libra like me. You know, scales of justice and very good lovers lol.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Yeah..no I'm an Aries LOL thanks for the midnight laugh Alastar

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      Peg Cole 4 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Very romantic and lovely, Frank. What a surprising change of pace.

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      Phoebe Pike 4 years ago

      I don't know. A lot of hubbers have been telling me that.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      yeah I know Pegcole.. I surprised myself..LOL thanks for stopping by and Phoebe I gotta check that find a few others too thanks for the reply :)

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      Phoebe Pike 4 years ago

      I noticed you hadn't commented in a while, but I figured my newer hubs just didn't inspire most of my readers to comment. *Shrug*

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      No,, even VSky who I read all the time I haven't commented on his work either and i just thought he wasn't putting out anything new..

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      Phoebe Pike 4 years ago

      Have you read "Cold World" installments?

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      ill check them out now Phoebe

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      Phoebe Pike 4 years ago

      I hope you'll like them.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      they were a treat :)

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      Eddy Jones 4 years ago from Wales.

      So beautiful Frank and thanks for sharing this gem with us.

      Take care and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks for stopping by :) Eddy good to see you

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      Aries man and Libra woman ~ Yes, strong attraction. Unfortunately - in many cases - the Libra woman, always trying to restore balance, extinguishes the fire in Aries.

      Sowwy!

      Oh, you must forgive this Aries girl for being so bold by posting a 'negative' comment :)

      This is a beautiful, no, awesome poem in the shades of erotica!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      It's okay whatever happened to make you negative is your business :) and thanks for commenting

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Frank, you do romance beautifully. Loved it.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      tobusiness maybe because Im a leg man.. right? LOL thanks for stopping by

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Frank you are so romantic my friend.. I see a new side of you.. In the future...You should meet a woman in one of Michelle's escapades..You like blonds or brunetts? Or maybe red hair what about black hair..LOl

      You are so awesome my friend

      debbie

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      I've always liked dark haired women.. but red intrigues me.. not blonde crazy.. LOL what am I saying so long as its female and has a pulse ring it up!!!!!!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Lol... Okay Frank.. One pulse coming up...lol

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      LOL silly...

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Very different from your genre. I like surprises. Had it been about a sagittarius, it may have gotten flagged as graphic as well...

      I hate limitations. If you ever take your flagged writing somewhere else please let me know. I will chk it out.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Moms you're the best come get a hug.. :)

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Frank, I enjoyed reading this poem which is different from the genre I read from you. Now, I know you can write on any theme.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks VG that means alot to me bless you

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      :D Hugs back at you. Come and get yours.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Im coming girl bags packed and on my little sister's pink banana seat bike.. gotta kick off the training wheels they're slowing me down

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Hahahaha! Too Funny. Love the visual. Again.... Awesome. You give me great breaks from reality. Can't thank you enough, especially for the laughs...

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      I enjoy sharing with you Moms.. :) again you're awesome

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      Jennifer Vasconcelos 4 years ago from Cyberspace and My Own World

      Blew me away with this one Frank, different than your usual style, different can be fun. Voting up, sharing.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      aawww jlava thank you and bless you :)

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Nice! : ) Quite sensual to say the least. Had to mark it up!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you dreamseeker :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      And you said you don't do romantic poems!! AND I missed this one too.... Missing all the good ones, boy! VERY NICE!! AWESOME..... Voting up and away!!

      PS: didn't really understand the title; you and somebody??!!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks Lathing for checking out my aries and Libra :) LOL

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      Denise Handlon 4 years ago from North Carolina

      This was so very nice

      I had to read it twice

      To check for any twist

      That I may have missed.

      You surprised me in the end:

      No killers, just two friends...

      An Aries and a Libra?

      I wouldn't of believed ya,

      'cept my sis is a 'Justice' ma'am

      and I sir, am a stubborn Ram.

      So let Romance bloom for these two

      Your audience is pleased...bravo for you!

      Thoroughly enjoyed this one and like so many others, was pleasantly surprised at this side shining through. Rated up and Awesome.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you so much denise...:) you made my day

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      Denise Handlon 4 years ago from North Carolina

      :) Glad to hear that.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      LOL bless you Denise

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