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Chaotic Whirlwind

Updated on October 26, 2012
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Sun beams shining

Bright shown bright

Captured by your


Intensity struck me

From all sides

Rain pouring in

From the outside

Electrical currents

Dragging me in a


Loved by sorrow

Drowned in lost

Slowly understanding

That I won't let

Pain overtake me

A love lost be gone

By tomorrow

Naked far away nights

In the dark outcry

Streaming and shooting

Madness can overtake me

Chaotic Whirlwind

Your a mind orgasm

Exploding into infinity

Passionately burned from

Deep within

It's amazing what music can do to your mind, emotions, and your body. There are some songs or albums that can stir up past emotions or a time in the past where you experienced strong emotions. Some of my favorite albums that do this for me is anything by Thievery Corporation, Enigma, Gorillaz - Demon Days , and Coldplay from the year 2005-2006. THis was a very emotional time for me.

This poem is inspired from the album by Coldplay X&Y during the summer and fall of 2005. A lot of memories and emotions came up during that time. Even when I listen to the songs now, they send chills up my spine (in a good way).

During that time a lot of things were going on in my personal life. An old relationship reignited for a short while then fizzled out leading me into the unknown to finding something new. I learned a lot of lessons in that short period of time. I was also learning who I really was on the inside. I also ignited a passion in me that I have never seen before. Every day had a certain intensity that I had never experienced before.


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      Justin W Price 6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      I second Zac. Those were my fave lines. fantastic poem!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Sky yes that is so true! Everyone can take away a piece of you if you let them.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Every time you go away you take a piece of me, that's the they say.

      Nice work.


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you Mathira.

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      mathira 6 years ago from chennai

      Very passionate and full of vibrant life.Good one carolinemd21.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Zac thanks for the comment. I love your writing too! I'm glad somebody else likes Coldplay!

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      Zac828 6 years ago from England

      Brilliant lyrics here Caroline! Really raw and passionate, very sad too. Loved:

      Your a mind orgasm

      Exploding into infinity

      Passion burned from

      Deep within

      I agree about Coldplay, that album has a bleak tone, as does the earlier Rush of Blood to the Head.

      Glad I'm not the only one inspired by such things. Keep going, we share the same taste in music as we do in words it seems.