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Dance on Darlene : A Hot Romantic Poem

Updated on January 14, 2015
Intimate couple
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Intimate couple
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You got tonight Darlene

Under the neon starlight

Dance on to the sweet slow tango

A heart surrendered to my body

With grace to brace your steps

As I peel you till you feel

Rhyme with my every move
For every dime your body earns
Up the hills.. Down the valleys
The cracks and curves
That hold mysteries untold

Can never be another tonight
So babe let it go
Away we fly as birds up in the sky
Busting with ripened sensations
That teases temptations
For we gotta run
For the fun
With wind to win

Soar high as the heat gets hotter
Burn in raging tongues of our euphoric pleasures
There ain't gonna be one more tonight
As we die in flesh and burn in ecstasy

Let the beads of sweat sweep your sweetness into wetness

And tame your softness into hardness
Igniting the denied passion
And opening gates of love
And if you beg for more
Babe I gotta lots to give

I gotta cup full of love
Treasured away for you
Tonight is our night
To sail away to known unknown
So Darlene dance on

© 2014 Ian D Hetri

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      deborah 5 weeks ago

      Loved the poem

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      Mufeez 2 years ago

      Everything published made a ton of sense. But, coneidsr this, suppose you added a little content? I am not saying your information is not solid., but suppose you added something that makes people desire more? I mean Running Poem Running Away | Running Poem is kinda boring. You should glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create article titles to grab viewers to open the links. You might add a video or a pic or two to get readers interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it could make your posts a little livelier.

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      Ian D Hetri 2 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Jamie,

      I do appreciate your comment but your glaring grammatical errors and all over place structure makes me question your credibility. Your suggested titles makes no sense at all. Save your comments for yourself.

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      Jamie 2 years ago

      I think everything poetsd made a ton of sense. However, what about this? suppose you added a little information? I am not suggesting your content isn't good, however what if you added a title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean Running Poem Running Away | Running Poem is kinda plain. You should glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create article headlines to grab people to click. You might add a video or a related pic or two to get people interested about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it could bring your posts a little livelier.

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      Ian D Hetri 3 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Thanks Tee

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      Teanerah Gina 3 years ago

      Mmm..interesting.. BTW beautiful poem though

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      Ian D Hetri 3 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      hey Eleanor,

      Thanks for dropping by and commenting. It was meant to be hot..lol

      Cheers

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      Eleanor 3 years ago

      Mmmm very interesting. I followed the link from cha's I think its way HOTTT..she liked it. I mean Loved it. Great one Ian.