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Go Beyond What My Eyes Can See

Updated on February 28, 2010

Love With The Light on

I am so relaxed when I come home and my love is near

I enjoy just walking through the door after a hard days work

I am transformed each day by the uniqueness of our passions we share

To be an equal provider and constantly lending each other a helping hand

We continually attempt to do more than what is expected of us

We keep making plans and discuss are future

There are no strings attached and no sadness for are shortcomings

Each time we have learned are love matures deeper and deeper

We find enormous satisfaction through are caring and compassion

If it is a smile,a nod that we are awake and still standing

A look that transends what we know

Just being in the same room and breathing together in symphony

The electrifing feeling of what we still don't know about each other

It can only be understood when we realize

How much we have done together

In an instant we are at each others side

Not just we are sick,worried confused and upset

When the whole world seems to get unraveled

We pull it together and make it work

To feel the sensations of familiararity

The closeness we can not always explain

When you call I am running

It can be only one thing

A true companionship

A love that will survive over the ages

Appreciated and respected

For what meaning it brings

To all of live in the end

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    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      Micky Dee Every time I see your picture I want to exercise.You remind me to get moving.Thanks for the quick reminder.

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 

      8 years ago

      This is great. If I were only still alive. Thanks

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick maybe you did help me in spirit.There are many interesting things we are still learning about the secrets of are minds and the universe.Thanks for the help and maybe I can help you with one of yours soon.

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 

      8 years ago from Great Britain

      Oh , Wow, I wish I'd written that. !!

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      Carolina Muscle top of the morning to you.Glad you enjoyed it.

    • carolina muscle profile image

      carolina muscle 

      8 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      This is simply beautiful, buddy!!!!

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      Darlene Sabella,Poetlorraine,Mytique,Phillip Carey61 Thanks for all your support and comments.I hope you all keep coming back for more.

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      philip carey 61 

      8 years ago

      Love can bring meaning, which is perhaps its most precious gift. Beautifully written.

    • Mystique1957 profile image

      Mystique1957 

      8 years ago from Caracas-Venezuela

      Dream On...

      This is a lovely feeling to share and it becomes sweeter and more meaningful when you share it with friends. It truly shows how devoted the two of you are and why you remain together! Nice hub!

      warmest regards and blessings to you both,

      Al

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      poetlorraine 

      8 years ago

      where are you......

    • Darlene Sabella profile image

      Darlene Sabella 

      8 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

      This is a beautiful and awesome hub my friend, you are so lucky you have experiances this kind of love. Great poem...loved it.

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      Poet We all have to work that is what pays the bills.See ya..

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      poetlorraine 

      8 years ago

      hiya have been working all weekend.... am just going in again now..... catch up later. O.K.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      8 years ago

      yeah.. nothing beats scribbling it out on paper first. I typically leave a line in between each written for changes..but yeah, getting it all out and saving them is great. I loved the length of your hub.. and it was very thorough.. look forward to revisions. :) I gotta go so nice chatting.

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      For the hub that you read I had 15 pages of interesting love and I figured I better down size it a bit.I sometimes fall in love with the steps as I rewrite and see the hub come alive before my eyes.I still do alot on the old notebook and pen so I can see my transformation to the end result.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      8 years ago

      Well, to me the key is it comes from your heart. I really enjoy your writing and using different words can be challenging. I feel chalenged sometimes too. Since I write so much about love, I feel it could get rather monotonous.. Enjoy writing how you feel.. It's all good. :)

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      I am on the right track.I just started having both by my side.I went one step farther and I put a little pen mark besides each word I use.Then I put a piece of paper in the page.I somehow use the same words over and over again.I think the same.Change is slow.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      8 years ago

      I really enjoy your writing because it is straight from the heart it is real time dimentional reading. If you want to spice it up with fancy words.. after writing or while writing have a Thesaurus on hand (and a dictionary) . When, I have a line in my head or even a word like 'love' or 'dream' , or anything, I'l look it up in the Thesaurus to see what other words could be used. Sometimes what I see takes me to looking up another from the choices to get deeper or better choices.. the Thesaurus is key. Sometimes I'll just read through it just to get ideas and plant new words in my mind. It so helps open up our vocabulary.

      All in all, it seems continually writing naturally opens up how we express and I really enjoy your works.. :)

    • DREAM ON profile imageAUTHOR

      DREAM ON 

      8 years ago

      invictus I welcome all suggestions.You help me become a better writer.I have always admired your beautiful hubs.You have a great gift.I constantly use are and our all the time.My wife proof reads my writing when she can.This time she was a sleep and I know if I put off a hub I will never publish it.So I say here goes.If you have any ways to help me I would appreciate it.

    • I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s profile image

      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 

      8 years ago

      So beautiful, Dream On! Sounds as though your relationship is quite lovely and divine. A true life partner. I love reading of such beautiful existing relationships... very inspiring! :D

      Not to pick, yet I've noticed you use the word 'are' instead of 'our' in comments and writing... Reminds me of me.. lol.. I often type 'here' when I mean 'hear' and vice vera..

      Great to read more of you.. have a lovely day.

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