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Should Have Held Her More

Updated on August 5, 2016

"Gone" by N'Sync

Should have held her more said I love you more...I should have told her

Gave her more, just tell her more, kept giving her more, more thought I showed her

She went back turned her back...something I just couldn't believe

Watched my baby curse her life..tried to save her twice I just have to leave

Knew deep down my kisses felt better...touched her soul heard her voice

Yet she slept, kept and created with a lesser man...my love made the choice

Things I can't even contemplate...so my hearts' like what the hell

Tell him his touches aren't real, its me you feel, please tell

When yall make love its me you think of makes lying there better

simple, false romance, love of circumstance how did he get her

does she think of me...her blocked calls and emails say yes

remembering how we talked till sunrise with her head on my chest

i guess it was the long distance of minds that in the end stole you away

You never had to leave continue waking up wit me you could just stay

too late can't go back now should have told you then

can't believe lost you to another, you were my lover..becoming my best friend

© 2010 WordNLipsAffair

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    • WordNLipsAffair profile imageAUTHOR

      WordNLipsAffair 

      3 years ago

      Thanks First Love!!!

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      Marlene Bertrand 

      3 years ago from USA

      Oh, this is beautiful, but sad at the same time. I really feel for the lost lover. Your poem is a reminder that we should always share our feelings of love to our loved ones every chance we get.

    • WordNLipsAffair profile imageAUTHOR

      WordNLipsAffair 

      3 years ago

      Thanks Amber!!

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      Amber 

      6 years ago

      OH MY..love it!!

    • WordNLipsAffair profile imageAUTHOR

      WordNLipsAffair 

      7 years ago

      Thanks Duffsmom..let me know how others make you feel...

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 

      7 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Love that last line! Very touching. The driving beat of it reminds me of having your mind turned on when you are trying to sleep and the thoughts just keep rolling and you can't turn them off...and I guess that is the way heart break feels. The punches just keep coming. Well done.

    • WordNLipsAffair profile imageAUTHOR

      WordNLipsAffair 

      8 years ago

      Clownfollower thanks for your comment and I feel you on that!

    • WordNLipsAffair profile imageAUTHOR

      WordNLipsAffair 

      8 years ago

      Debbie love does hurt but yet on the same subject it feels so right and good..thanks for your comment

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      Clownfollower 

      8 years ago

      This is really deep. Makes me think of the one that got away and wishing I can have him back.

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      debbiesdailyviews 

      8 years ago

      I read this twice.

      This is a beautiful heart wrentcher.

      Love really does hurt !, and you expressed it brilliantly.

      Well done, this is great

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      Erica 

      8 years ago

      Pretty good..I'm feeling this one!!!

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      First Love 

      8 years ago

      I could feel every word its was so clear..incredible

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