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The Part of a Broken-hearted Girl

Updated on July 25, 2016

One time in our life, our heart gets broken. Some grow stronger but others never recover.


Staring at the girl with the lavender eyes

Sitting alone under a bright blue sky

Whispering a sad sweet note

Echoes of faith and a sprinkle of hope


She silently wiped her tears away

And gazed into the open sea

Just because she kept her life whole

You don’t have the right to mock her soul


Her friends ruined her life

Jealousy and envy on sight

The rain washed away her dreams

Together with her so-called best friend


I think she learned her lessons well

For she picked herself up when she fell

From afar, I still looked at her

And somehow I say a little prayer


You deserved to have the lead role

Not just the part of a broken-hearted girl

Go throw that script away

You still have a chance to re-write the play


She's a lovely and sweet young girl

But people around betrayed her

Now she's all alone

Floating on an empty song


Her hair danced on the light breeze

And lips on a soft twist

Those lavender eyes smudged with tears

Was the last thing I saw in her


I stared one last time to this girl

She lived on my past and I barely know her

While I put down the mirror and smiled

Ready to face the journey called "life"


xoxo.


© 2013 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.


Sometimes, I just have to hold my head up high, try not to cry and say goodbye... Because I'm so tired of playing the part of a broken-hearted girl.

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      This is just beautiful. Lovely it touched my heart.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Rajan.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      A very touching poem and an unexpected ending. Thanks for sharing this.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Dianna, thank you!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi, Paula. Thanks for this wonderful comment.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Very painful to experience a broken heart. Very touching.

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      Paula 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      "Some hearts grow stronger, but others, never recover."

      Sad, but true, spy.....some broken hearts cause us pain for a lifetime.....This is so moving and profound..... Thank you for the beauty....UP+++

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Genna! That was really amazing!

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Ohhh, that last line was powerful, Myz…but this entire poem was beautiful and filled with amazing metaphor. Wonderful work by a talented poet. :-)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Girishpuri.

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Very well written and quite emotional, well done, God bless.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Rosemay!

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Oh this is just fabulous Myz. So much emotion and I was so taken aback at the end, that gave me the biggest smile. :))

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Christy! Thank you so much.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Rui.. Thanks for this wonderful comment.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Nancy!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Jantamaya: I just woke up and read my HP comments.. and this is really a WWOOOWW!!! You really made my day! Thank you sooo much!

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      Christy Birmingham 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      What beautiful images you create of this lady. Well done.

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      Rui Carreira 4 years ago from Torres Novas

      Nice one Mycee! It's true... I don't think that applied only to girls.. meh

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      Nancy Yager 4 years ago from Hamburg, New York

      The feeling really some out in this poem.

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      Maria Janta-Cooper 4 years ago from UK

      I never read poetry... I thought. This what I read here made me cry (just a little, just a touch of a tear).

      Spy, you are a MASTER of POETRY.

      I've seldom read anything better written than this poem. (Voted up+shared).

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Jackie, Jo, Beckie, Michael, Faith, Tom, Larry, Deb, Mhatter:

      Thanks a lot friends for your unending support on my writings. Thank you so much for all the ups, votes and shared. appreciate it very much especially on your comments!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Nice reflection, thank you

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      So well said and acted upon. A memory is all that is left, and a success has flourished. Outstanding!.

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      Larry Wall 4 years ago

      Ms. Spy,

      I am really proud of you and grateful that we met, in writing, and not in person. I think a remarkable future awaits you. I will always be thinking about you. Your writing is amazing, and your poetry is excellent. You are a talented person and from all I can tell, a very kind and caring person.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Awesomely written, your words were filled with emotion and left this reader in awe . Well done !

      Vote up and more !!! SHARING !

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, how every beautiful (as it is written by a beautiful person) and with a lovely ending ---never look back!

      Excellent poetry.

      Voted up +++ and sharing.

      I am working on one now, and I want to link this poem to it.

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      beautiful poetry spy......

      "floating on an empty song "

      great image ... it is burned into my mind ..

      thank You for the moment.

      Michael

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Outstanding Spy! I never saw the ending coming but when it did, it had one powerful impact on me. Glad to know she picked herself back up as I happen to think she is an amazing human being with a beautiful soul. She has so much goodness and talent to offer this world. She makes a difference.

      Voting up and sharing

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown, beautifully done, I could almost feel the pain and betrayal. They do say, however, ' what doesn't kill us makes us stronger.' Up and more

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Ah, you surprised me and got a smile. Very good!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Blaise for such a wonderful comment.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks Devika for such a nice compliment.

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Very well written and expressed. Heartbreaks are part of our lives sadly but when we healed, we always feel specially happy. Move on and embrace a new happy life.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      life is what you make of it , you have written a beautiful poem.