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The Perfect Kiss

Updated on July 17, 2013
Hetk Enne Suudlust, a kissing couple in Tallinn
Hetk Enne Suudlust, a kissing couple in Tallinn | Source

Gabby stood at the kitchen counter staring and admiring the beautiful roses that Edward gave her just moments before.

Loving this man in her life was as easy as boiling water. It was effortless. She loved him from the moment she laid eyes on him seven years ago and her love grows with each passing day.

Gabby carefully and thoughtfully arranged these perfect garden specimens in her favorite crystal vase. The fragrance was amazing. She closed her eyes for a moment and allowed the fragrance to envelope all her senses.


While under the floral spell, Gabby felt the touch of a gentle hand brushing her long black hair away from her delicate neck. Suddenly, the soft wisping touch of Edwards’s soft lips began to brush the nape of her neck sending a shiver all the way down her body.
She could feel his hot breath as he continued to gently kiss every inch of her neck. Edward gently slipped the strap of her top off her shoulder as he continued without pause to lay those perfect gentle kisses on the woman he loves.
Still standing behind Gabby, Edward brought his left hand up around her waist and found his way to her soft belly. With his right hand, he lovingly took her hand in his and lifted her arm up over the back of his head as he continued to kiss the entire length of her arm. With slow caressing kisses and an occasional soft lick of his tongue, his incredible touches created a stirring within her.

The Most Famous Kiss in Film

Edward approached her beautiful hand, and slowly began to take each finger in his mouth one at a time, sucking with just the right tension. As he finished the last morsel on her hand, Edward slowly turned his love around without taking his eyes off of her.
This beautiful creature stood there before him while he devoured her with his eyes. He hungered and longed to taste every inch of her.

Gabby was totally mesmerized and engulfed with her man. Their breathing began to deepen as Gabby’s breasts began to rise and fall against Edward's sculpted chest, causing his loins to quiver.

Without a beat skipped, Edward cupped Gabby’s face in his hands with a gentle fever, then looked into her eyes for what seemed like an eternity and with a hunger in his mouth, he gently placed his lips upon hers, pressing lightly at first as if to line their lips up like a lovers puzzle.

The Kiss That Started it All- "From Here to Eternity"

Slowly spreading her lips apart, Edward could feel her warm breath as he gently inhaled his way into her trembling mouth. His tongue swirled and teased the rim of her upper lip and then followed the outline of her bottom lip gently nibbling as he let out a soft moan. Edward could not control his hunger any longer. His mouth came upon hers once again and invited himself into her cave of wonder. Probing and tasting her with passion beyond compare.
Gabby whimpered as Edward kissed her harder and deeper. The combination of the taste of his mouth and his unleashing scent caused her to feel faint in his arms. Edward embraced her with his strong unyielding arms as if to never let her go. The heat was magnificent.
This sensual taste they were both experiencing heightened their senses in every way possible. Their hearts were beating with rapid rhythms as their passionate kiss climaxed to a new level.

After returning to earth, Edward slowly released Gabby’s mouth from his and once again, looked deep into her eyes with the love a man has for a woman and whispered in his weakened voice, “Gabriella, I love you more than all the kisses that have ever been.”

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Lisa has directed and acted in musical theatre for nearly 30 years. Her musical upbringing allowed her to pursue her career in teaching and directing and continues to direct shows today. As the owner of 2 online Home Décor sites, Lisa’s passion for Rustic Living all begins with her love for the home, outdoors, and her many hobbies. Lisa loves to laugh, and she share’s that love through her comedic hubs centered on her MOM. Lisa’s passions include writing, directing, acting, photography, singing, cooking, crafts, gardening, and home improvement, including decorating. Lisa also writes under her penned name, Elizabeth Rayen.

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      Elizabeth Rayen 4 years ago from California

      Thank you so much AUPADHYAY! ♥

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      Elizabeth Rayen 4 years ago from California

      So happy you enjoyed it lovedoctor! and yes... Thank you Ruchira! ♥

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      ANIL KUMAR UPADHYAY 4 years ago from INDIA, UTTAR PRADESH STATE, KANPUR CITY

      Interesting hub rusticliving, voting it up.

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      The perfect kiss hooked me right from beginning to end. Loved it. Thank you Ruchira for sharing this hub.

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      Elizabeth Rayen 4 years ago from California

      When it happens..(and it will) It's wonderful! ♥

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Would be really nice to have a woman that could appreciate this kind of attention.

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      Elizabeth Rayen 4 years ago from California

      Thank you so much Ruchira! I'm pleased you enjoyed it!♥ So wonderful to see you my friend!

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      Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

      loved reading the analysis on this, Lisa.

      Sharing this across!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 4 years ago from California

      Cloud.. you are priceless!... I'm glad you enjoyed it..and enjoy it every time you kiss your beautiful wife! Thanks for the kudos! :)

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      This is how it is every time me and my wife kiss, oh the passion is in the air, and the deep diving, into that cave occurs at times as well LOL.

      Nicely written hub here and filled with hot passionate details that will make anyone who reads it quiver!

      Thumbs up and out! for sure Bravo!!!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thank you so very much pringoooals :)

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      Karina 5 years ago from Edinburgh

      Nicely written. Voted up!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thank you HLKeeley! I'm pleased you enjoyed it! :)

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      HL Keeley 5 years ago from Charlotte, NC

      This was elegantly written. The illustration was perfect!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thank you so much Astra Nomik! (Love that name) I am pleased you enjoyed it! Have a great day! :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      This is terrific. Very passionate and powerful. The cave of wonders is a wondrous place indeed. I enjoyed reading this hub. :)

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      My thoughts exactly! Thank you! :-)

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      nice work. short and to the point. why waste time?

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      LOL. Wipe the persperation from your eyes and read it again.... HINT: READ EVERYTHING!

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      Audrey Hunt 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      OK, Rusticliving (pant pant)...I can't find the mistake. Too caught up in this "time to take a cold shower" poem. Well done!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Oooo I love M.B.seattleamilehigh1! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the vote!

      :-)

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      seattleamilehigh1 5 years ago from Seattle, Washington

      Crazy Love- Michael Buble

      That's all that came to mind.

      Great page and voted up!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thank you SanneL! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :-)

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      LOL CMerritt. That's the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me! Thanks for the vote! :-)

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      To be kissed like that. . .Wow!

      Delicious, steamy and sexy writing!

      I love it! Well done.

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      Chris Merritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

      WOW!

      Time for a walk outside for some fresh "cool" air.

      I gotta vote up on this one!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thankyou pedrn44! It is written from experience. My honey is a wonderful kisser!

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      Sandi 5 years ago from Greenfield, Wisconsin

      wow...to be loved like that. Beautiful writing.

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thank you Sunshine! I'm so happy you liked it! :)

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      Linda Bilyeu 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Steamy, sultry, fascinating! Very nice Lisa. I like your poll, I found the mistake:)

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Awwwee.. Thank you so much Tammy! I loved writing it. Though I must admit, I had to stop a few times to compose myself..hahaa

      Thank you so much for your comment!

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      Elizabeth Rayen 5 years ago from California

      Thank you very much Ardie. I really appreciate your comment!

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Oooh la la! Something to be said for feeling a pair of familiar lips belonging to that special someone you've come to know over the years. Beautiful writing!

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      Hot stuff Rusticliving. You have some excellent chops for fiction. Steamy. I love the old time setting also. Bravo!