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Trail of Broken Hearts

Updated on December 1, 2011
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The girl was gorgeous

With a capital G

She left a trail of broken hearts

Wherever she be

Diamond encrusted jewelry

No rhinestones landed she

The men stared

Spread like wildfire

Around her to see

Presents from all sides

Gathered to her

Gucci...

Prada...

Armani...

To boot

She loved her new life

Mist of glitter in the air

She wasn't always like this

She never really cared

Until the one man

That she had loved

Swallowed her heart whole

And left her alone

Now she stands proud

And flaunts her shininess

For all her lovers around

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      Justin W Price 6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      glad i made you feel better!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Saddlerider I agree with you. In today's society this picture is portrayed so much with celebrities. I wanted to portray that from that type of woman's perspective. Thank you for your comment!

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      I've seen it time and time again, the trail is littered with broken hearts. Yet Karma comes to everyone eventually and material possessions are just STUFF. The real scent of a woman is in the Tango she leaves her man wanting and coming back for more of HER without her stuff:-)

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      PDX lol thanks for commenting and making me feel better!

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      Justin W Price 6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      good work. I know people like this, male and female. Uggh

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Phyllis thank you for taking time out to read it. :)

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 6 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      I really like this poem. Very well done! UP

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Tom you are so right it does. Thanks for reading. :)

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      c21,

      what goes around comes around- usually ten fold

      Th

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thanks V Qisya!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      LOL Ghaelach thank you for reading. :)

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      V Qisya 6 years ago

      Love this! Beautiful ;D Voted up and away

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      Ghaelach 6 years ago

      Morning Caroline.

      Lovely hub, but this girl is way out of my league.

      UP/A/B

      Take care Caroline.

      LOL Ghaelach