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Whisper

Updated on July 21, 2009

Hold me tightly

cry a tear

whisper softly into my ear

whisper of your illusions

needs, fantansies

comfort in a secret place

desires and mysteries

whisper of your fears

your ghosts in the past

whisper what you never tell

I'll listen as it  lasts

your whispers will not escape me

they stay only within

whisper your secrets

I'll whisper mine, you see

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      Imagin8tion 

      9 years ago

      I liked this! Thanks for sharing it :-)

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Thanks Dennis, it is kinda cute isn't it!!

      hubhugs

      dori

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      dennisematt 

      9 years ago

      awww... :) I love a happy story. Hope Im not intruding..but congratulations. It is a beautifull thing to know someone trusts you with thier heart. That they can cry to you of fears, and pains past, then you can smile again and look ahead to new joys in the future. How nice of you to share this, to remind us that good does still happen.

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      Army Infantry Mom 

      9 years ago

      Your words are simple but beautiful,...Glad your around to share them,...

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      Robert E Smith 

      9 years ago from Rochester, New York

      This was simple but deeply complex. I loved it and it shows something in your soul that is to be cherished.

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      dohn121 

      9 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

      This was very personal poem, wasn't it? Thank you for sharing.

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Thanks bp, I love to write em.

      dori

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      blondepoet 

      9 years ago from australia

      Oh I am a sucker for such beautiful poems :) :)

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      SEM Pro 

      9 years ago from North America

      this too is better than passing! when i first posted poetry, think i put 6 or 7 on there, with pics and videos and such. Donno if that helps any but hey, if they are all like this, and with stunning music to match - please keep throwing! Awesome!

      Did you get the late night tranquil trip on the water link?

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      Ladybird33 

      9 years ago from Fabulous USA

      Beautiful, rich and passionate, loved it.

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Thankd you Sem Pro, poetry is my niche. But I don't think HP likes alot poetry esepecially with little text. I will just throw one or two in every so often. I am in that mood though, you know, where you want to write to write not articles or how to's. This too shall pass.

      hugs

      dori

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      SEM Pro 

      9 years ago from North America

      In the quiet and stillness of the night, you took perfection to a whole new height dear dori! This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read - and with Sarah's melodious caresses - new heights indeed! (or should I say, "new depths" :) )Thank you

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      shinujohn2008 

      9 years ago

      Hai ,

      Photo galleries and photos & videos category are for photos and so it is not compulsory to give importance to text.

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Thanks for sharing him cabin girl, but ya can't have him back.

      dori

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      same isp!! i feel like an idiot, she or you promised me a picture of a dolphin, gosh I am so stupid. You are so cool. I like her too.

      love it. Glad she isn't your girl. wow, i am now blushing

      dori

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Is cabin girl your wife or something? I am sure I will luv it!!!!

      dori

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      I will be looking for it. Where is Cabin Girl haven't heard much of her lately?

      dori

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      glad you liked to BC when I really want to write something from the heart or the real "me", it is usually in a poem.

      moonflower

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      BC, I guess i am starting to make my point...

      dori

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      thanks John, you are all too correct.

      dori

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      John Chancellor 

      9 years ago from Tennessee

      Beautiful ... I suspect that one of the greatest missing elements of our society today is someone each of us feels safe enough to whisper to ...I think we are in too big of a hurry to get no where that we have lost the ability to connect, trust and whisper.

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      must be the weather!! rainy and dreary here

      dori

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      \Brenda Scully 

      9 years ago

      that was really lovely, some really nice work, I am reading today.... everybody is in the poetry mood

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Thanks Shame!! appreciate u reading!

      dori

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      shamelabboush 

      9 years ago

      I really, actually love! Though short but pregnant with nice connotations!

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      My psycologist said I should have at all time 3 feet of personal space.

      lol

      dori

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      Tom Rubenoff 

      9 years ago from United States

      This is a very moving, lovely poem. Did I hear something about two square feet of space?

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      fortunerep 

      9 years ago from North Carolina

      Thanks G-ma, Let me know when you are ready for your moonflower seeds.

      dori

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      Merle Ann Johnson 

      9 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      I do see..Love everywhere...wonderful...:O) Hugs

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