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You'r On My Mind

Updated on March 18, 2010

Take Time To Appreciate

When life is bouncing of walls like an automatic superball

We fear to move forward and we know we can not go back

Searching for something to hold anything to keep me sane

Troubles seem to consume me like charcoals under the flame

I reach out for an open hand

One that is so familiar and warm

One that brings back memories of love that will never end

Comfort and joy fill my body now

From a fountain deep beneath the ground

Where all life comes from and all life ends

Peace is in the air even though lose ends unravel

Courage to continue is given

From a friend thousands of miles away

The littlest thought from her caring nature

Makes the difference from understanding and ocnfusion

Thinking of things she thinks

Clears my mind and relaxes my spirit

My energy is found

To write again when all things seem down

The rat race continues and so does the endless spiral of misconception

Truth is found in the hearts of a few

Poetlorraine if you haven't guessed it this poem is for you


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Justine 76 I push on and enjoy your loving thoughts.Poetlorraine Just happy to see you.Keep being yourself that is always enough.Artbrush 73 These are special times for me with special people like you.Darlene Sabella you give me great comfort in your words.Dim Flaxenwick I love how my circle of friends is like a small circle in a bigger circle.That circle is inside another that is inside one more. It is endless.What else could I ask for!!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      Tear-jerker, that one for sure. Even more so knowing it was for our dear friend Poetlorraine.

      Thabk you. It was beautiful x

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      Darlene Sabella 7 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

      I love this poem, it really jumped out and held on to me tight. We all feel this way about someone in our part, someone that is no longer hear, someone we miss and think about. Fantastic...

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      artrush73 7 years ago

      Great hub. Very nice :) keep it coming :)

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      thankyou so much, how kind of you..... did i ever tell you......... oh i am too shy to say it....

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      Justine76 7 years ago

      "Courage to continue is given

      From a friend thousands of miles away" I just KNEW it was for Poetl when I read that line. How nice!!