I see u r following me, so I guess it wont be difficult for you to track me here. You can contact me on hubpages whenever u want. You r welcomed in advanced. Now lets talk about the review you asked for.
- Good sides of your hub: Its very detailed, well organized & focused on a single point (which is criticizing the ahmadis)
- Bad sides of your hub:
1. From the very beginning it is clear that you are biased against the Ahmadis which is not good for you as an author. A reader usually expects his author to be unbiased. Dont put your judgment on the readers. You need to present your information more tactfully & let the audience decide what is truth & what is blasphemy!
2. You have used many arabic words like Qafir, Murtads etc. Dont forget that you have many Christian or non Arab readers too. For them, these words would be annoying no matter how many times you have given them the meanings.
3. Rather than presenting what Muslims or Islam say about Ahmadis, you can present your argument more rationally. i.e. explain how absurd their believe is by stating that they are mixing Buddhism, Islam, Christianity altogether, explain that Buddha, Jesus & Mahdi cannot b the same person, establish that how Mirza Ghulam used the name of jesus, mahdi & krisna to rise to popularity.
4. To make your hub more attractive, you can use relevant pictures or videos from Youtube. You can also add a Poll bar in
the middle of the hub, asking the readers what they think of Ahmadi faith system.
I know I have suggested a lot of things (bcoz u asked for it). Hope it works.