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but angelic

Updated on September 21, 2012

Her beauty

was that of neither sex,

but angelic,

perfect,

silk lips,

curved hips,

soft smooth face,

and the room warms

with her flattery, her grace,

and no matter what she’d touch,

you could feel the embrace,

even too little was too much,

everything she sees,

was like a sensual mystery,

flapping in the breeze,

paradise brushing against the trees,

and when she stood there,

fragrances from the flowers

just filled the air,

kisses would linger

and soak through her hair,

love without a care,

but she doesn’t exist,

she’s just a transparent mist.

© 2012 Frank Atanacio

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Oh Boy! Now we have a very beautiful ghost among us.

      Which reminds me, I was walking down our stairs when I felt a soft brush of something like a cat against my ankle. But I saw nothing that could have done that.

      Great work and so wonderful to read.

      Voted up and truly AWESOME, Joyce. Have a great weekend my friend, Joyce

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      The words in this poem flow brilliantly Frank....very well written:-))

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      lol Joyce maybe it was the cat LOL you have a great weekend too and Valleypoet.. stayed away from death secenes LOL.. I think ...:)

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      There is no cat in this house.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      oh then Joyce you may have a ghost LOL

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....leaning towards your more romantic idealistic side Sir Frank and yes you are - and always will be one of my favorite poets/writers here at the Hub and I will share your introduction/Hub home page with a FB group called Writing and Music - lake erie time 7:55am

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks epi your still tops!!!!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Beautiful and as romantic as always! xx

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks acaetnna :) bless you

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Very sensual and romantic, Frank, and very nice!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you Genna East

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      Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

      wow...this imaginary beauty can definitely scare me :)

      Beautiful image you created, Frank!

      Voted up and sharing it across

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank Ruch for stopping by and leaving a comment.. bless you

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      Brenda Barnes 4 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Frank, you are a romantic! Good for you and for us because we get to read your beautiful work. This is just soft and lovely like a gentle rain for sure. Thank you. sigh

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thanks H for stopping by bless you

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      You are a flow master Frank. Your work has always been captivating to me but the heart tuggers can take me away.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Yeah .. they call me the Flow Ryder..LOL yeah I'd take you away alright :) thanks so much Moms as always you're the best

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      This piece reminded me of the smell of Lavender that would wisp through my den at times reminding me of her angelic presence . I would take pause for a moment, lift up my head and smell and almost taste her standing by my chair. Yes indeed ghosts/spirits indeed do make themselves felt at times. I am delighted that she visits me on occasion. This is a tender, romantic piece. I so much enjoyed it my talented poet.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you for you kind and encouraging words.. talented .. hmm but coming from you Ill take it! LOL

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Different kind of write for you I think--I really like this style from you--just lovely, lovely piece

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 4 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      beautiful!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you so much Audrey for stopping by and Thank you too Duffsmom.. bless you both

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      Jennifer Vasconcelos 4 years ago from Cyberspace and My Own World

      Frank ,

      you mix and mingle elements so divinely.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you so much Jlava bless you

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Simply exquisite poetry dear one. I missed this one some how, but I am so blessed to read it now. I had no idea of your extraordinary gift as a poet as well as criminal scenarios writes. I believe I love the poet side of you even more, if that is possible.

      Voted Way Up across the board, except funny.

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      thank you for the kind words Faith :)

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      Justin W Price 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Nice work, Franjk... stunning ending!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Came back to pin and tweet.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Thanks PDX and Faith ...:)

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