Did the content stand out from other articles on travel? Was it clear that there was something uniquely feminine about the experience? Anybody can break down on the road, but the way you are dealt with is different. Do you think this article is a good one to expand into a short story? ie. expand the dialogue and flesh out the characters? Feel free to add any other constructive comments. I'm here to develop my writing.
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Of course, I always proofread my work. However, when a mistake like that happens, it's usually an error that happens during the editing process. Thanks for pointing that out. I will attend to it immediately.