Uknown

An uncontrollable

Force seeped into

Everything that I knew

It could read thoughts

Penetrating every cell

Within you

There was no escape

From it

It was almost a

Collective conscious

That grew with every thought

Every emotion

It was dark and heavy

It sucked you down

If you made it known

You knew it was there

This unknown

Force had it's grip on

You without letting go

Like an evil addiction

You were it's prisoner

When it had you

Transforming you

From within

Coming out from

Every pore


Paul Neruda A Poetic Inspiration

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Ericdierker 2 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

I like it.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Most intriguing poetry. Nicely penned.


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carolinemd21 2 months ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Eic. :)

Thank you Gypsy. :)

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