Do Dogs Go To Heaven?

The old man was walking along a winding mountain road. A road as beautiful and scenic as any the old man had traveled. With him were his two best friends, a couple of mutts that were getting on in age themselves. On this warm and sunny day they walked together enjoying each moment. At night when they lay to rest in the forest the old man held one friend in his arms while the other lay his head on the old man.

Eventually they came to a magnificent gate opening to streets of gold. It was clearly more lavish than anywhere on earth. The old man was a bit confused but vaguely aware that something tragic had happened. He recalls an accident. Perhaps this place before him was Heaven. It certainly was more magnificent than anything he had ever seen. Now he is aware his friends had passed away years before, yet he was with them again. Nearby, a footman attended the gates and offered greetings to the majestic city. The old man wondered if this was Heaven. Reading the man’s thoughts, "It most certainly is replied the footman." "We have here the finest of everything for you. Whatever you wish is yours. Here you will have wealth as you have never before known." Oh how wonderful! Today he and his best friends were together at the gates to eternity! Unbelievable! He cried "Could I please have a glass of water and a bowl for my friends? "Certainly sir, but, sorry, we don't accept pets." The old man was silent and stood in shock. All these years he had believed in eternity only to find he would be separated from his best friends. He took a last look and turned and proceeded down the road with his buddies. What was the point of an afterlife if his best friends were not there?


The day wore on and dusk was near when the winding road led to a farm gate where a beautiful woman offered greetings. The three were quite thirsty now. The old man inquired "Might you have water for me and my pals?" "Sure, there's a pump and a bowl for your dogs," said the young woman. "Come on in." After man and dogs drank their fill, the old man noted "What a pleasant farm, even better than Heaven!" The woman laughed, “This is Heaven!" But "Down the road, that was heaven, too?" Said the confused old man. "Oh, that place with gold streets? Actually, that's hell" said the young woman. “We screen out the folks who'd leave their best friends behind in order to walk gold streets. No my friend, this is the gate to Heaven".

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Fay Paxton 5 years ago

What a magnificent story! When I first started reading I thought you were the old man with your dogs. Then it started talking about heaven and I knew I was mistaken. LOL


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Well done. You can understand though the rule about no pets where the streets are paved with gold. It's just practical.


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Terry.Hirneisen 5 years ago from Shenandoah Valley Author

Yes Fay,I am a man of conflicts. When I think of animals is when I come the closest to being a theist.

Thank both of you you for reading.

Terry


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Another beautiful hub Terry, my old mum used to tell me when I was growing up, if a dog likes you there is nothing wrong with you. So I will remember your hub for every dog that I have loved and lost. x


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Brilliant and I can't wait to read more of your work now.

I push all the buttons on this one.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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Thatguypk 5 years ago

beautiful story, Terry. I like to think that dogs so much more deserve to go to heaven than human beings!


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Terry.Hirneisen 5 years ago from Shenandoah Valley Author

Thatguypk,

I become more of a hopeful Theist whenever my thoughts are with my animal friends that no longer walk the earth.

Thanks for the comment.


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Spirit Whisperer 5 years ago from Isle of Man

A beautiful story with a beautiful message. I have always loved this kind of story which sneaks into the subconscious and plants seeds of love. I hope you write more of these.

Thank you.


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Terry.Hirneisen 5 years ago from Shenandoah Valley Author

Thank you Spirit Whisperer!


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Sister Mary 5 years ago from Isle of Man

Great story ... really enjoyed that a woman was at the gate of the real heaven! By the way Spirit Whisperer, my husband, directed me to you. I'm delighted he did so, he is a great fan of yours as I am now.

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