I'd like feedback on my Hub: Gifts from our Creator

  1. markeleazer profile image72
    markeleazerposted 8 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Gifts from our Creator (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 8 months ago in reply to this

      It's too rambling and unfocused and doesn't really address the title. You need an introduction to explain what the hub is about and perhaps why you feel the need to write it.

      Who is your target reader? Why might they be searching for the information in your article?

      HubPages is for writing magazine-style articles. At the moment it reads like a personal blog post. Religion is a good topic and very popular, but you should focus in on the specific - there are way too many sites competing for your reader's attention.