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    Anitha1978posted 8 years ago

    Just dropping by to say hi. Im Anitha. I just signed up with Hub Pages and released my first hub. If any experienced hubbers here would take a look at it and give me your comments i would surely appreciate it and improve myself. thanks

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    hot dorkageposted 8 years ago

    (too) many parenthesized expressions (wink wink)
    a few minor grammar mistakes, nothing horrible. 
    hub is basically OK.  Welcome  to hubpages.

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      Anitha1978posted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you for checking my hub out. I will work on the mistakes.