one summers night

i am here waiting for you

you may be sound asleep as i write this but my love is right beside you on your pillow

you think of things you want to do tomorrow i think of things we did today

you worry about things gone wrong i love the things we did together all day long

you are on vacation and think of places to travel i just try to make you laugh and smile

you are wondering when im coming to sleep and i just want to listen to your heart beat

you watch the news and worry about the world i just am so lucky to call you my girl

you try so hard to make everything right i just want to hold you close every night

you wonder about life and get so angry when things go wrong i just laugh and tell you don't worry and be strong

you have made all my dreams come true and i often try to help you

you are stubborn and wont listen i dont care because i know your always going to be there

you will adventually know im yours and always have been so

you will find out soon why i am your man

you have all your love to give i know because we often walk hand in hand

you have the prettiest smile to show my heart is yours as if you didn't know

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

Awww, this is super sweet! :)


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

glad you liked it


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

yes it is a nice poem


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chickmelion 7 years ago

Beautiful... don't stop now... keep on writing!


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

it's more than nice... it's wonderful


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

That's my biggest problem. I carry my heart on my sleeve.I am proud to say I'm not the only one.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

carrying your heart on your sleeve is not really a problem is it??????


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

I have done it for song I know no other way.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

why change now......


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

We change every day but we don't notice it.Hopefully for the better.See you soon off to the plant.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

so other people notice us change..... but we do not, interesting and i suppose very true


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

I have to make a correction... Writers notice life around them and see the littlest things others don't because they take the time to appreciate a little conversation in the wee hours of the morning.Where other people say I'm going to bed.The hay with ya.


\Brenda Scully 6 years ago

mmmmmm know what you mean


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Some writers are so gifted they can take you anywhere at a moments notice.


\Brenda Scully 6 years ago

is that so...... maybe it is your imagination that is tuned in


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

If I could be so lucky?


\Brenda Scully 6 years ago

does not matter how good a writer is if you have no imagination, it will do nothing for you..... isn't that right


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

You are so smart.Why were you hiding all this wonderful knowledge from me?


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brandonfan 6 years ago from Mid West

Awwww! How sweet! What a positive outlook! I wish I could be that way myself. I think I'm more like the woman that you're talking about in this poem though.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

I think most women do circles around guys.They really do plan things out and what ever you do don't upset there plans.For me it is just another wonderful day and I'm so glad your in it.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

ah another wonderful day indeed, so many of us in it of course ,,,,,, some of us twice or even three times, know what i mean


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Please do explain?


poetlorraine 6 years ago

you know some have lots of identities, don't they


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Sometimes the simplest is the hardest to find.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

you know what you are winding me up now..... i think i know who you are, but sometimes i can be soooooooo wrong........ are you simple then


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

As simple as a lonely tree.One that you would want to curl up to a good book under and watch the leaves fall.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

exactly....... then there is the snowman with the scarf, and so it en ds


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

I think you have got it wrong.It is only the beginning.You follow the yellow brick road and all your dreams come true.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

looking for the yellow brick road.... ah yellow,


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Yes i have a good friend who could write about anything even the colour yellow.What a good writer.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

my god he could even write about the colour yellow, could you give me the link.... custard kinda comes to mind


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Not a he but a wonderful grandma too boot!


poetlorraine 6 years ago

so where is the link


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

I am not to computer savy.But I think if your lucky you can link up with her anytime she is in the mood for writing.Thanks for a good morning and lots of laughs.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

oh i need to find her


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

I thought you had an old hub on yellow.But it was your friends hub.I sometimes get both hubbers mixed up.You both create some incredible pictures and videos besides the great poems that follow.


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deepthought 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America

Dream on, you are living proof that chivalry is not dead and romance lives. Nice hub


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

deepthought I know no other way.Thanks for reading my hub.

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