Inside She Screams
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I sit
Wait patiently
Primly
But inside she screams
Desperately craving
To be ravaged
The wild thing imprisoned there
A famished nymph with untamed hair
Unnoticed the fire flashes
Behind my hungry eyes
As savage scenes play
In the theater of my mind
I pull the scent of you deep into my lungs
And then salivate like some beast
Invited to a primal feast
And there you to take me
Roughly
Fingers buried in waiting flesh
As you devour me completely
repeatedly
with out apology
The spinning room slows
Reality reconvenes
I force a smooth exhale
Controlled
Composed
I sit
Wait patiently
Primly
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Wow, that was quick Shamel. I'll try and keep my.... err her voice down. ;)
Im not sure what to think of that, kinda freaked me out a little bit but made me think, I felt sadness, maybe fear..not sure
Why am I sweating after reading this, Randy? Geez! You are one helluva writer, you know that?
If only there's no need to keep it under control... this puts the OH in sO Hot!
My foreplay poem is among the related hubs - why is that? *wink*
Wow JoJo, certainly didn't mean to scare you. lol! Its a little thing called lust. Mine has a little personality all her own I guess. :) Don't be frightened I keep a tight reign on her.
Oh Dohn I do so love to make you sweat!!! And thank you.
Hi Cris :) I'm kinda one of those water behind the damn girls. Ya damn well better know how to swim before you open it.
I think it is quite appropriate that Foreplay is in related hubs... it did give me my sultry send off to lustful poetry land. Remember?
Yeah I remember! And we even started a trend, didn't we? We brought sexy back if I may say so. :D
Did we Cris? Big (up to something) grin from me if we did. Now I just need Sandy to say "Fierce" so I can go to bed. :)
while sandy's out of sight, would VICIOUS do?
*Giggle* Haven't heard that in a while.... ya I think I can sleep on vicious. Thanks.
wow this is smokin hot! :) A force to be reconned with!
sooooooo passionate, run the bath, and soak a while, the two of you maybe
Well thank you Invictus. It did get a little warm in here.
Yes Lorraine, a bath is always the perfect answer, no matter the question.
I may have to go for an EKG. :)
Glad to have got your heart going Jess.
My goodness! I think I my blood pressure just went up. I do love a prim lady. And a famished nymph? Well, it doesn't get much better than that. Outstanding poetry. Thanks for the pleasure.
One can be both. I'm walking, talking proof. Thanks for coming by James. :)
Randy--you definitely can torment these men here! Now look, you have em all out there, tongues wagging--I told you that you are just freaking FIERCE!
Ha! I read the dialogue there between you and Cris (he is a cutie, isn't he?) Yes, fierce is your writing dear Randy--just so sensual as you are a woman. -superfreakinhugs-
I am kinda 'notmyself' nowadays--I am having an existential crisis at the moment. I hope to get better soon.
Glad I didn't wait up for you Sandy, Geez!
My grandmother used to knit while she talked business. The idea being, part of her brain would be distracted by the work of knitting and it would free her mind to think creatively. Sometimes when we focus on a more logical task the creative juices flow more freely. Its almost as if we have two selfs. One will allow the other dead self to come alive again.
Not that I would personally know about having two selfs, I'm totally just talking theory here. -BiggerHugs-
Oh la, la.... Randy...Dah'ling... I friggin loved it!
Oh I'm glad Mella. I have a feeling you are not the type to keep your feelings, wants and desires bottled, though. Are you?
Primal and gorgeous.
Well thank you Phillip.
Now you have me licking my own lips in a facsimile of the lips I would lick in stereo places...lol....how the atirst in me would dabble for long blissful minutes.... hours fingerpainting smiles....a man can dream..can't he/???~~~~~~~~~lol~~~MFB III
Happy to have awakened your dreamer's mind MFB. Finger painting smiles, hmmmmm. :) :) :)
Randy, well done the page is a blaze with raw emotion. I can relate to the line,"I pull the scent of you deep into my lungs And then salivate like some beast." When all of our sensors are firing at once the experience become intense. This writing has some serious HEAT!
Thanks Carson! Sometimes I feel like I'm a pressure cooker. Need to vent the steam. Poetry helps. ;)
I could barely get beyond those toes in the photo. I feel ravaged somehow.
Oh CC! Check out the toes in Intermingle.
I never knew you were a famished nymph. You have a skill for this hotness, and not just in your superlative poetry. ssssssssizzle!
Some days, but some days I'm well fed. Speaking of sizzle, when is Victor coming out of moth balls?
Funny you should ask. The writer's group is starting an erotica workshop, and Victor is asking me if we can join. LOL
I only have one word to say about this DAMMM
Sometimes one word is enough. :)
Snake Eyes beat me with the one word routine, but really "nice". JM
O.K. James, I guess I'll settle for "nice."
Awsome RB, I am glad I found your sight. Very awesome!!!!
Crickette I'm glad you found me too :)
shamelabboush says:
6 weeks ago
A great depiction of a long supressed and passionate desire! I could hear the inner screams, thanks Randy.