A Girl Sadden Soul


Once he was a sweet charm

Delightfully engaged her heart

In graceful loving melody


She love him very much

And so she thought he does too

But love she loved alone, he was never true


He left her linger in confused as he struck her with hurting words

Emotionally, mentally she was abused

And she never knew, she never knew


That love would hurt so much

That the man she love once stood now left her side

That love can be the threat of her life


With great tears form her eyes she shiver, quiver

Buckled knee, tighten chest, distress

Lingered upon her lost heart


Life bled in horror

Slowly she was drove into insanity

Pain pressure in great force leaves more tears formed her eyes


Emotional stress storms her heart

Broken pedals like of a broken heart

Drifting from the air and lie upon her graved soul


The sounds of painful cries

Echo the dark room

As he watched her dying from a broken heart


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lyns 5 years ago from USA

So sad, being in love and being left behind can do so awful things to the soul you are right, sad but true reality sometimes. Thanks for sharing voted. Up and interesting. Hope you have a lovely evening. 11/3/11 11--pm


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi lyn, yes, I agree with you being sad. It is awful if experienced. I hope to never experience this. I too hope you have a great evening! 11:13pm :)

Chanroth


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lyns 5 years ago from USA

Chanroth, your welcome, thanks me too so sad for those that have. I hope you have a great evening too, I enjoy your writings too.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That gave me the shivers. Powerful poem.


Derdriu 5 years ago

Chanroth: What a chilling experience when deep love not only is not even shallow but cruel!

Thank you, etc.,

Derdriu


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Charu Bhatnagar 5 years ago from India

Very nice but painful.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hello! Thank you all very much for commenting and reading.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

so sad...i can share the misery she's feeling...great poem chanroth...


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi raciniwa, thank you. Yes it is sad! :)

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